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Ravens Blood

Rescue my bleeding heart. Assured I was doomed from the start. Vultures are waiting for my demise. Energy wasted so here are my goodbyes. Nothing but black all around. Surely no one will hear a sound. Breathing is deep, I know what I must do. Look into my soul, how could I be so blue? Obscene images twirling through my mind. Obscured visions of happiness are confined. Darkness comes over me as I join them. By Cami Hostetler 1-14-11 Among the Dead Contest Entry

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Date: 7/3/2016 12:57:00 AM
CAMI, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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Date: 2/24/2011 12:00:00 PM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Cami. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 11:08:00 AM
Wonderful write with a challenging form.Congrats on your win in the contset Cami----kashinath
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Date: 2/19/2011 7:27:00 AM
Many congratulations Cami on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:15:00 AM
A vivid image of a sad and tragic death, Cami. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:45:00 AM
Great story, Cami. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:42:00 PM
Cami, congratulations on your honored place in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:53:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of constance, Cami
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:37:00 PM
Nice entry here. Congratulations on winning in Constance's contest with your work.
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:12:00 PM
Congrats Cami on your wonderful win in Among the Dead contest.. enjoy sweet success with luv..
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Date: 1/14/2011 8:46:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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