Cami Hostetler Poet Acrostic

Ravens Blood

Rescue my bleeding heart.
Assured I was doomed from the start.
Vultures are waiting for my demise.
Energy wasted so here are my goodbyes.
Nothing but black all around.
Surely no one will hear a sound.
Breathing is deep, I know what I must do.
Look into my soul, how could I be so blue?
Obscene images twirling through my mind.
Obscured visions of happiness are confined.
Darkness comes over me as I join them.

By Cami Hostetler
1-14-11
Among the Dead Contest Entry

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Skat A July 3, 2016 at 12:57 AM CAMI, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*

Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 12:00 PM I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Cami. Love, Carol

Kash Poet February 19, 2011 at 11:08 AM Wonderful write with a challenging form.Congrats on your win in the contset Cami----kashinath

James Fraser February 19, 2011 at 7:27 AM Many congratulations Cami on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)

Carolyn Devonshire February 18, 2011 at 7:15 AM A vivid image of a sad and tragic death, Cami. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Elaine George February 18, 2011 at 12:45 AM Great story, Cami. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

John Freeman February 17, 2011 at 6:42 PM Cami, congratulations on your honored place in the contest. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta February 17, 2011 at 5:53 PM Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of constance, Cami

Robert Pettit February 17, 2011 at 5:37 PM Nice entry here. Congratulations on winning in Constance's contest with your work.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 17, 2011 at 5:12 PM Congrats Cami on your wonderful win in Among the Dead contest.. enjoy sweet success with luv..

Constance La France January 14, 2011 at 8:46 PM Thank you for supporting my contest.