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Raven Eyes

When I take off as a raven, the branch wobbles my dark figure melts into the night. No pack, no company aside from the starlights— they were once alive, but now all there’s left are fragments of tears from somewhere above, is it heaven? I wouldn’t know. Wearing shadow of night itself, I glide through the air. Beneath me, a city in neon fire. Cars rush below— one place to another. The suffocating air is filled with nylon lies woven between patched love, silenced truth, and money slipped through envelopes. I never understood that part. My eyes spot the candlelight from a small apartment window— bright dancing orange, but dead as the stars. I fly closer, in the window, a young girl with silk raven hair, inking silence with a long white quill. Her lips unspooling low syllables too old to rhyme with time. The girl looks up— Our gazes lock— but she recognizes me, not the raven. The shape of my own eyes waiting in hers. Candle light falters, the night twists into a swirl and drags me in with force. The dead starlights flicker alive— —I wake up at midnight, breath caught in the echo of her gaze. Outside my window, a raven flies past— I feel the wind in my chest.

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Date: 6/8/2025 7:53:00 PM
Superior dramatic verse here, Jasmine. Imagery is captivating... Terrific write. Bravo, Gershon
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Jasmine Tsai
Date: 6/8/2025 9:00:00 PM
Thank you for your kind compliments, Gershon <3 This is an actual dream I had the night before... I'm so happy that you think I've captured the imagery I want to express through words. Your encouragement means a lot to me.

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