Jan Camille Tongco Poet Acrostic

Raven: Death By Dawn

Reaper Grim, I ask you thee
          to accompany me
As I tread the dawn and beg
          to see my last
Victory against all victories.
          As I reach upon this crucial
End, the deep, dark and decayed
          all welcome me. And
Now the early sun shall surely see
          the grace that Death shall grant to me -

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Contest Entry - Among the Dead sponsored by ~ Constance ~ A Rambling Poet ~~
Written by: Jan Camille Tongco
14th place

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 12:01 PM I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Jan. Love, Carol

Jan Camille Tongco February 23, 2011 at 7:34 PM thanks for all your kind comments. it really means a lot. love lots - camille ^_^

Jan Camille Tongco February 23, 2011 at 7:30 PM thanks for all your kind words ^_^

Kash Poet February 19, 2011 at 11:12 AM Beautiful write with a challenging form!Congrats on your well deserved win Jan----kashinath

James Fraser February 19, 2011 at 7:26 AM Many congratulations Jan on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)

Carolyn Devonshire February 18, 2011 at 7:17 AM I like the approach you took with Raven begging the Grim Reaper to help her find grace in death, Jan. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Elaine George February 18, 2011 at 12:46 AM Great Acrostic, Jan. many Congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Robert Pettit February 17, 2011 at 7:22 PM Good writing Jan. Congratulations on winning in Constance's contest with this good entry.

John Freeman February 17, 2011 at 6:43 PM Congratulations Jan on your honored plac in contest. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta February 17, 2011 at 5:54 PM Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of constance, jan

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 17, 2011 at 5:13 PM Congrats Jan on your wonderful win in Among the Dead contest.. enjoy your sweet success with luv..

Harry Horsman February 3, 2011 at 4:31 AM Hi Camille, how on earth did i manage to put the name Joe in my comment i don't know. any how given me another reason to read this wonderful poem again, time permitting, hopefully will read more of yours. Harry

Kash Poet February 1, 2011 at 9:32 AM Wonderful write!Goodluck in the contest!

Constance La France February 1, 2011 at 6:08 AM Thank you for supporting my contest.

Harry Horsman January 31, 2011 at 8:01 PM Certainly one of the best i have read, Joe. this is excellent. Harry