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Raven: Death By Dawn

Reaper Grim, I ask you thee to accompany me As I tread the dawn and beg to see my last Victory against all victories. As I reach upon this crucial End, the deep, dark and decayed all welcome me. And Now the early sun shall surely see the grace that Death shall grant to me - ================================ Contest Entry - Among the Dead sponsored by ~ Constance ~ A Rambling Poet ~~ Written by: Jan Camille Tongco 14th place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/24/2011 12:01:00 PM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Jan. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2011 7:34:00 PM
thanks for all your kind comments. it really means a lot. love lots - camille ^_^
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Date: 2/23/2011 7:30:00 PM
thanks for all your kind words ^_^
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Date: 2/19/2011 11:12:00 AM
Beautiful write with a challenging form!Congrats on your well deserved win Jan----kashinath
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Date: 2/19/2011 7:26:00 AM
Many congratulations Jan on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:17:00 AM
I like the approach you took with Raven begging the Grim Reaper to help her find grace in death, Jan. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:46:00 AM
Great Acrostic, Jan. many Congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 7:22:00 PM
Good writing Jan. Congratulations on winning in Constance's contest with this good entry.
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:43:00 PM
Congratulations Jan on your honored plac in contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of constance, jan
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:13:00 PM
Congrats Jan on your wonderful win in Among the Dead contest.. enjoy your sweet success with luv..
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Date: 2/3/2011 4:31:00 AM
Hi Camille, how on earth did i manage to put the name Joe in my comment i don't know. any how given me another reason to read this wonderful poem again, time permitting, hopefully will read more of yours. Harry
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Date: 2/1/2011 9:32:00 AM
Wonderful write!Goodluck in the contest!
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Date: 2/1/2011 6:08:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:01:00 PM
Certainly one of the best i have read, Joe. this is excellent. Harry
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