Rattle

On light industrial units, sheet-metal roofs
ting under the rising flames of sunlight,
alloy is stretched into ping-pong rhythms.

He arises, rolls off the side of comfort
For a moment tramples on himself 
as if he had too much baggy skin.

Morning on the edge of a medium-sized city.

This summer
I will inflate or die, he thinks,
this late chiming morn,
I will behead habitual pretensions,
cast my anchored mind upon uncharted waters.

Minor keys ding as plated roofs tick and clack.

Those sounds’, he thinks, I can use somewhere -
After all, I am a poet
and do I not prattle and rattle when stirred?
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Lawless Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 4:41 PM
very interesting as it would seem that almost anything can awaken the muse and stir the poet's pen
Ashford Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 8:35 AM
Thanks John . It does sort of rattle along.
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