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Rather I, Sharpen Blade, Saddle My Battle Horse, Dawn, First Battle, Part One

Rather I, Sharpen Blade, Saddle My Battle Horse, (Dawn, First Battle, Part One) Dare I, reduce poet's pen to a plastic sword flee from shadows that invades as destructive hordes? Nay, such would incinerate reborn poetic soul, bring heartache and destroy path to truth's gallant goal. Rather I, sharpen blade, saddle my battle horse walk through searing flames alone yet on steady course. Expect more vicious attacks around each bend, live out my final moment with defiant grin. Should I, with courageous pen far more truth post ink midnight hours, not fear darkest of evil ghost? Beg more paper, its white pages let my ink soak, in my defiance, strike those wearing evil's cloak? Can I, with good conscience, this hard journey trek. Knowing Raven's curse, both my eyes- out IT shall peck. Robert J. Lindley, 10-18-2019 Sonnet, ( If Valiant, Let Ink Splash To This Dark Beast Slay ) (Dawn, First Battle, Part One) Note: Fuscus, qui mortalium haec faciam tibi mali iura Et invenies in me plus perdomandosque feroces et fortes periculum pertinet.

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Date: 10/23/2019 10:44:00 AM
A pen of light fears no dark.. an ink of intense flow carves gems.. a quill of depth soaks not in shallow lakes.. A great poet you are, Robert, ever on a journey of beauty and valour.. a great poetry, a FAV.. my deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 10/20/2019 12:52:00 PM
Hi Robert, this is an excellent write, fighting fire with the excellent poetic grace that is your gift. Your words shall always sing on the soup and only fools shall not be able to see the amazng skill of your pen. May your words ever shine. Never let anyone stop your wonderful words from flowing. You are and shall ever be a true poet. Love the content of the piece. Have a wonderful evening. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 10/20/2019 8:36:00 AM
My favorite line; "Knowing Raven's curse, both my eyes- out IT shall peck." I wish more peeps could find the strength that is the core of this poem.
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Date: 10/20/2019 2:29:00 AM
Excellent Robert. I look forward to reading the next...xxoo A Fave!
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Date: 10/19/2019 11:46:00 PM
I await your eventual resounding victory as your tale unfolds. Great start my friend. Have a good day.
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Date: 10/19/2019 4:08:00 PM
A supreme write...'Whether tis nobler in the mind to suffer the slings and arrows of outrageous fortune, Or to take arms against a sea of troubles, And by opposing end them'. A true poet like yourself my friend will not be intimidated by their words...but rather your words intimidate them...be strong Robert and march on dear brother...^WW^
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Date: 10/19/2019 3:21:00 PM
Hi Robert, I love your poetry and have often named you a 2nd Shakespeare - your talent is 2nd to none and I have a high respect for you my friend. Don't let people get you down, just get even! 'Rather I, sharpen blade Saddle my battle horse' as you so rightly and defiantly said. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/19/2019 12:54:00 PM
Yes, guns blazing, poet. And may your enemies, whoever they are, befall. Oderint, dum metuant) A bleeding fav.
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Date: 10/19/2019 12:20:00 PM
Hello Robert, I can tell that you are in pain as you wrote this poem. You know something, no one can write a poem like yours. You have that special touch in your style of creating poetry. KEEP ON WRITING!!!!! Your Friend, Darlene
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Date: 10/18/2019 11:12:00 PM
My dear friend, there are Thorns on Roses- and sometimes we bleed. True, but never give into the pain, because beauty lingers too. You are an amazing poet. Thank you for being here, for being You. Your Words Shine. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/18/2019 10:02:00 PM
Robert, I like this write, a Sonnet fit for October's call to arms. "Expect more vicious attacks around each bend, live out my final moment with defiant grin." You, ever the defiant, show your worth. -Richard
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