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Rat

Rat
Dead rat
Dead rat stinks
Dead rat skeleton
Dead stinking rat covered with ants
Dead stinking rat covered with fire ants
Dead stinking rat covered with fire ants becomes skeleton
Gone forever dead rat remembered only by this description in fibonacci

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James Fraser Date: 8/3/2009 2:58:00 AM Not a style i had seen before, Miss Sara - your portfolio is ever expanding, well done to you>>James Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 8/2/2009 11:20:00 AM Clever girl...so much of life and death goes unnoticed..Ill never look at a rat quite the same way again. BG Login to Reply

Cesar Cantu Date: 8/1/2009 3:43:00 PM @.@ fuchi @.@ jojojojo gorss image, raw, realistic, I love it xD and your use of Fibonacci @.@ my 66 poem tries to follow such pattern, (1-13 and backwards), yet it is a tough thing to do jojojo thanks a lot for the experience =D wiii Login to Reply