raspberries

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A fruity haiku poetry contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 05/25/25

scarlet raspberries each fruit contains little pips ~ the taste of summer

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James Peranteau

Date: 5/25/2025 2:38:00 PM

sweet...ya said a mouthful dear poet ')

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/25/2025 2:16:00 PM

Enjoyed the haiku, everybody's gone fruity around here. It's not my fault that when I looked at the picture, my mind said, "DIVERTICULITIS" (once you feel it, you never forget it). I pray you've been living a fulfilled, healthy life. Love, CayCay

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/26/2025 12:29:00 AM

Do you ever write poems inspired by your garden and post an actual picture of it to accompany the write? Over, what, I must think, the past 9 years, you've talked about it here and there, maybe written about it. It has always sounded like both a delicious, generous garden overflow and a beautiful place to spend time in. Before we moved, I had blueberry bushes and just loved picking them when ripe, taking them inside, bathing them ....

Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2025 2:22:00 PM

Thanks CayCay, the pips sure are irritating for those with stomach issues but they also get in my teeth lol, that said i have lots growing in my garden as the plants have invaded my strawberry patch. i cant wait for the fruit to ripen!! hugs Jan xx