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Rare Snowfall

The white snowfields of my childhood are but fond memories today in mild winters where I live some fifteen hundred miles away. Today I wakened to a sight that carried me back in time, bright snow lies on the ground, the trees are rimmed in rime. In winters of the long ago my daddy kept a pretty sleigh and horse or two to pull it on a splendid bright, winter day. Over-coats, scarves and galoshes, all were ours in good supply to get us through winter and snow drifts, mountain high. I wish that I could conjure up a horse and Daddy’s big red sleigh that I could take for a drive on such a sunny winter’s day. I’d gather up my grandchildren in my big sleigh for a ride. to show the beauty of a wintry countryside. For Catie's syllable contest won a 5rth place

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Date: 11/8/2010 5:38:00 AM
Many congratulations for this win Joyce.
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Date: 11/7/2010 8:17:00 AM
Congrats Joyce my friend on your wonderful win in the syllables contest with this excellent entry and amazing write.. enjoy this happy Sunday with lots of luv..
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Date: 11/6/2010 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce on a beautiful poem place in the tope ten. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/6/2010 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Catie's contest "Focus on Syllables". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/6/2010 8:25:00 AM
I knew this lovely poem would be found among the winners, Joyce! Congratulations on your well deserved win! ~
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Date: 11/6/2010 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Joyce
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Date: 11/6/2010 7:43:00 AM
So glad to see this one in the winners' circle, Joyce. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/6/2010 7:11:00 AM
Can I come? Just beautiful..congrats. BG
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Date: 10/20/2010 7:26:00 PM
I love this one, Joyce, I hope it does well in the contest. What a beautiful memory!
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Date: 10/18/2010 9:07:00 AM
Maybe the snow seemed deeper when we were children because we were so small, but winters often seem milder now than the ones I remember as a child, Joyce. I realize you have moved to a different area with a warmer climate, but I loved the images of you getting on the sleigh for a ride through the snowy countryside. And I didn't even realize this was for the syllable contest until I saw your note. I have tried to write for it but failed miserably. You created art! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/16/2010 2:39:00 PM
Exceptional poetry to be reading this Saturday afternoon Joyce the best to you in the contest. . Hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/16/2010 5:45:00 AM
Great entry for contest my friend loved the imagery and tale this reminds me of my dad but we had tobboggan fun then it was off to hot coco thanks for sharing and for your kind comment on my poem keep up the great work
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Date: 10/16/2010 5:19:00 AM
You have chosen a very memorable theme for the write, enjoyed it, Joyce
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Date: 10/15/2010 7:52:00 PM
Beautiful lines Joyce and such memories retold too.. a lovely entry for the contest that Catie should luv.. u have managed the syllable count so nicely with brilliant words luv.. good luck and happy weekend ...
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