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Rapture Wave

Wind 
whistles
tempting tune,
on air-swept wings
beguiled birds soar high
to seamless sapphire sky
with the fleet of cotton clouds,
design changing silk shapes adrift.
Art shifts on curved canvas of cobalt,
flows as a freedom form with rhythmic joy.
I’m swept by rapture wave surge of nature,
swaying me on swells of solitude,
resounds the music of silence
in pristine precinct of peace
that suffuses my soul.
Lured by topaz sky,     
my mind adorns
jewels of
divine
joy.

Copyright © Subimal Sinha-Roy | Year Posted 2025

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Susan Ashley Date: 6/21/2025 8:07:00 AM Dear Subimal, I can't help but be swept up by the "rapture wave" too, such is the power of your amazing imagery. Your poem is so beautifully expressive, uplifting and appreciative. Double congrats are in order for both POTW and for your success in Ink's contest.. enjoy your well-deserved accolades. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/25/2025 9:18:00 AM Thank you, Susan. I am overwhelmed by your wonderful comments.

Beata Agustin Date: 6/21/2025 5:56:00 AM Congrats. Thanks for sharing this... God bless you. Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/25/2025 9:17:00 AM Thank you.

Ink Empress Date: 6/21/2025 4:01:00 AM This is absolutely gorgeous dear SSR, i love the way youv personified nature and how eloquently youv painted imagery in your double etheree! Its stunning and soul warming and has an artistic touch to it especially the opening lines as well as your descriptve diction is truly impressive and flows so well too! Beautiful shape to your poem too! Pleasure reading this gem! Congratulations on your win in my contest! Sending you light always Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/25/2025 9:17:00 AM Thank you so much for the placement and for gorgeous comments.

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 6/13/2025 1:17:00 PM captivating with beautiful imagery! congrats on your POTW designation. Well-deserved! Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/15/2025 1:36:00 AM Thank you so much.

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 6/11/2025 5:14:00 AM Truly, spiritually uplifting poem Subimal. You enchant with your lilting alliteration. Congratulations on POTW! :) Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/15/2025 1:36:00 AM Thank you so much, Linda.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/11/2025 2:24:00 AM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.w. jewel, Subimal :) - hugs Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/11/2025 2:27:00 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 6/10/2025 9:47:00 AM Hello Subimal, your words carry me on the wind, lifting my spirit high above the world. It’s as if I’m riding a wave of pure peace, lulled by silence, wrapped in solitude, and crowned with the jewels of joy you’ve found in the endless blue. Congrats on POTD! Blessings, My Friend, Daniel Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/10/2025 10:45:00 PM Thank you so much, Daniel for your read and wonderful comments.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/9/2025 2:27:00 PM Such great work deserving of POTD! Congrats! Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/10/2025 5:55:00 AM Thank you, Kim.

Jan Allison Date: 6/9/2025 3:42:00 AM a gem of a poem, many congrats on POTW! hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/10/2025 5:55:00 AM Many thanks, Jan.

Tania Kitchin Date: 6/9/2025 3:26:00 AM Subimal, a great creative poem. Congratulations on POTW. Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/10/2025 5:55:00 AM Thank you so much, Tania.

Beryl Edmonds Date: 6/9/2025 1:33:00 AM A lovely Etheree poem Subimal, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the week… Beryl Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/10/2025 5:54:00 AM Thank you so much, Beryl.

Karen Jones Date: 6/9/2025 12:06:00 AM Lovely form with alliteration sprinkled amongst the colorful jewels! Love it! !Congratulations on potw Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/10/2025 5:53:00 AM Thank you so much.

Brandy Nicole Date: 6/8/2025 4:58:00 PM The wind- and those cotton clouds, they always seem to create a beautiful mood for me. This is so inspiring and uplifting. I like your usage of alliteration gently tucked within. Congratulations Subimal, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/10/2025 5:53:00 AM Thank you so much, Brandy for your read and for the wonderful comments.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/8/2025 8:46:00 AM Congratulations on your POTW win. What a wonderful "Rapture Wave" Etheree write. Love the ending. Yes, joy.... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win............... Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/10/2025 5:51:00 AM Thank you, Paula.

I Am Anaya Date: 6/8/2025 8:15:00 AM Beautiful diamond shape of natures symphony. Congratulations on your POTW, Subimal! Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/10/2025 5:51:00 AM Thank you so much for your read and comment.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/6/2025 8:45:00 AM Ooh…so lovely! seemless sapphire sky…fleet of cotton clouds…curved canvas of cobalt (a shape outside the diamond)… pristine precinct of peace…lured by topaz sky! A fave, dear Subimal! ah… Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/10/2025 5:50:00 AM Thank you so much, Kim for faving.

Ghairo Daniels Date: 6/4/2025 12:20:00 PM An exquisite wave of a diamond. Soo delicately written. Beautiful last few lines. U write unpretentiously but with form. Enjoyed this read & pattern tonight. ThkU. Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/6/2025 2:23:00 AM Thank you for reading and for enjoying the poem. Your comments are gracious.