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Rapture Wave

Wind whistles tempting tune, on air-swept wings beguiled birds soar high to seamless sapphire sky with the fleet of cotton clouds, design changing silk shapes adrift. Art shifts on curved canvas of cobalt, flows as a freedom form with rhythmic joy. I’m swept by rapture wave surge of nature, swaying me on swells of solitude, resounds the music of silence in pristine precinct of peace that suffuses my soul. Lured by topaz sky, my mind adorns jewels of divine joy.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 6/21/2025 8:07:00 AM

Dear Subimal, I can't help but be swept up by the "rapture wave" too, such is the power of your amazing imagery. Your poem is so beautifully expressive, uplifting and appreciative. Double congrats are in order for both POTW and for your success in Ink's contest.. enjoy your well-deserved accolades. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/25/2025 9:18:00 AM

Thank you, Susan. I am overwhelmed by your wonderful comments.

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/21/2025 5:56:00 AM

Congrats. Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/25/2025 9:17:00 AM

Thank you.

Ink Empress

Date: 6/21/2025 4:01:00 AM

This is absolutely gorgeous dear SSR, i love the way youv personified nature and how eloquently youv painted imagery in your double etheree! Its stunning and soul warming and has an artistic touch to it especially the opening lines as well as your descriptve diction is truly impressive and flows so well too! Beautiful shape to your poem too! Pleasure reading this gem! Congratulations on your win in my contest! Sending you light always

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/25/2025 9:17:00 AM

Thank you so much for the placement and for gorgeous comments.

Sara Baker

Date: 6/13/2025 1:17:00 PM

captivating with beautiful imagery! congrats on your POTW designation. Well-deserved!

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/15/2025 1:36:00 AM

Thank you so much.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/11/2025 5:14:00 AM

Truly, spiritually uplifting poem Subimal. You enchant with your lilting alliteration. Congratulations on POTW! :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/15/2025 1:36:00 AM

Thank you so much, Linda.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/11/2025 2:24:00 AM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.w. jewel, Subimal :) - hugs

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/11/2025 2:27:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/10/2025 9:47:00 AM

Hello Subimal, your words carry me on the wind, lifting my spirit high above the world. It’s as if I’m riding a wave of pure peace, lulled by silence, wrapped in solitude, and crowned with the jewels of joy you’ve found in the endless blue. Congrats on POTD! Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/10/2025 10:45:00 PM

Thank you so much, Daniel for your read and wonderful comments.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/9/2025 2:27:00 PM

Such great work deserving of POTD! Congrats!

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/10/2025 5:55:00 AM

Thank you, Kim.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/9/2025 3:42:00 AM

a gem of a poem, many congrats on POTW! hugs Jan xx

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/10/2025 5:55:00 AM

Many thanks, Jan.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/9/2025 3:26:00 AM

Subimal, a great creative poem. Congratulations on POTW.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/10/2025 5:55:00 AM

Thank you so much, Tania.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/9/2025 1:33:00 AM

A lovely Etheree poem Subimal, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the week… Beryl

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/10/2025 5:54:00 AM

Thank you so much, Beryl.

Karen Jones

Date: 6/9/2025 12:06:00 AM

Lovely form with alliteration sprinkled amongst the colorful jewels! Love it! !Congratulations on potw

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/10/2025 5:53:00 AM

Thank you so much.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/8/2025 4:58:00 PM

The wind- and those cotton clouds, they always seem to create a beautiful mood for me. This is so inspiring and uplifting. I like your usage of alliteration gently tucked within. Congratulations Subimal, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/10/2025 5:53:00 AM

Thank you so much, Brandy for your read and for the wonderful comments.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/8/2025 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTW win. What a wonderful "Rapture Wave" Etheree write. Love the ending. Yes, joy.... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/10/2025 5:51:00 AM

Thank you, Paula.

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/8/2025 8:15:00 AM

Beautiful diamond shape of natures symphony. Congratulations on your POTW, Subimal!

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/10/2025 5:51:00 AM

Thank you so much for your read and comment.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/6/2025 8:45:00 AM

Ooh…so lovely! seemless sapphire sky…fleet of cotton clouds…curved canvas of cobalt (a shape outside the diamond)… pristine precinct of peace…lured by topaz sky! A fave, dear Subimal! ah…

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/10/2025 5:50:00 AM

Thank you so much, Kim for faving.

Ghairo Daniels

Date: 6/4/2025 12:20:00 PM

An exquisite wave of a diamond. Soo delicately written. Beautiful last few lines. U write unpretentiously but with form. Enjoyed this read & pattern tonight. ThkU.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/6/2025 2:23:00 AM

Thank you for reading and for enjoying the poem. Your comments are gracious.