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Rapture In Obsidian Premiere Contest Winner

Ivory stars flicker and spit like candles kissed by zephyrs. Midnight foil effervesces, raptures me in obsidian. Gladiolus come begging at my crimson thoughts. Smoky Cirrus caress a white butterfly crescent. Charcoal embers in a pit whisper ashes of roses. Cerulean wavers in remnant flames of saffron. I stir absinthe at an onyx table on a porcelain patio. Chartreuse gardens fade in sable shadows.

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Date: 7/8/2017 10:18:00 PM
Beautiful writing Dale, congrats on a fine win, looks like Brian is also a fan!!
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Date: 6/7/2017 1:15:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win, Dale! A pleasure to read
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Date: 6/5/2017 9:37:00 AM
Beautiful poetry! Thanks for dropping in on mine.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/5/2017 3:17:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 6/5/2017 7:53:00 AM
Nice style, and lovely images. Great work.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/5/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thanks, Scott.

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