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For Constance La France's Rambling, Rundown, Rapture words poetry contest.

 

 

“To have the wings to fly and roots to reach deep inside is to find beauty and tenderness amid the gravel and dust and the wound opens the rupture into a rapture.." Jayita Bhattachargee
In the ambient silence of twilight's gentle embrace, silhouettes and shadows dance as stars sparkle in grace. Ecstatic eyes gaze towards spheres where dreams come alive, an enchanting canvas of wonder where spirits revive. An air of perfumed peace whispers in pomegranate skies, celestial sensations glow as lavender clouds comprise. Ivory moon commands horizons with purple hues, as its rays reflect in glorious amethyst views. A sense of serenity gives birth to spiritual rapture, like a moment of nature, photographers crave to capture. Where lonely lovers allow their elated souls to take flight, merging with darkness to illuminate an ebony night. Soaring beyond earthly boundaries of euphoric delight, in a cosmic flow reflecting lanterns of fluorescent light. Romance is a rhapsody of rainbow colours free flowing, a perfect palette of pastels that leave a heart glowing. Realms of true love endow golden visions of vivid bliss, softly soothed by lips of a beloved's enchanting kiss.

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Date: 4/23/2024 5:47:00 AM
Silent, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive poem, I love the quote too, Constance
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Date: 2/28/2024 8:30:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Rapture" write again again. It is lovely.... Have a great/fun day writing away...............
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Date: 2/27/2024 11:47:00 PM
Oh, my goodness, this is rapturously beautiful Silent One. I miss being able to bask in the beautiful poems you and the other poets share, I love this. I see there are a lot of poems you've written since I have been able to be on here for almost any time at all, but I am so blessed to read your amazing pen's serenades of sheer beauty in this one tonight. Hopefully I will soon have more time to read all I've been missing for the past few months. It's good to see you've been busy on here :)
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Date: 2/20/2024 1:05:00 PM
This was a beautiful and enchanting poem, Silent One! A pleasure to read! :)
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Date: 2/19/2024 3:42:00 AM
Wow..... lovely! I have fallen in love with this beautiful rhyming couplet full of sweet sunshine. Even in darkness and at midnight, let nothing disturb us. There is an 'enchanting canvas of wonder where spirits revive'! Your poem has lifted me to a magic land. I enjoyed this much "Ivory moon commands horizons with purple hues, as its rays reflect in glorious amethyst views. A sense of serenity gives birth to spiritual rapture, like a moment of nature, photographers crave to capture". Fantastic lines.
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Date: 2/18/2024 3:14:00 PM
This is a beautiful view of twilight. It is so very tender.
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Date: 2/18/2024 5:24:00 AM
Delightful journey my friend into the world beyond--Ecstatic eyes gaze towards spheres where dreams come alive, an enchanting canvas of wonder where spirits revive---much enjoyed the read that leads to the realms of true love.
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Date: 2/18/2024 1:52:00 AM
An air of perfumed peace whispers in pomegranate skies, celestial sensations glow as lavender clouds comprise. Wow, What lovely softness and imagery to these lines....Hugs
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Date: 2/17/2024 6:21:00 PM
S. O., your vividly descriptive poems blending romance and nature are so appealing! Janice
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Date: 2/17/2024 4:33:00 PM
a wonderfully written and delightful poem. Again you've outdone yourself with such exquisite imagery. As I read your poem I thought I was joining you on a mystical journey, a place where elated souls take flight. Loved 'soaring beyond earthly boundaries. I sincerely am at a loss for words as to how to tell you how divinely exquisite your poem is and how marvelous is your creativity. Have a pleasant weekend, Sara
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Date: 2/17/2024 4:31:00 PM
I'm glad to be reminded that some lovers are lonely. It brings diverse interpretations. What a lovely romantic poem, I enjoyed it so much I wish to be a romantic for a day. It just would be nice if love had just a side to the coin. Lastly, darkness brings light. I loved this, Silent One, very clear and engaging.
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Date: 2/17/2024 3:13:00 PM
Great title for a very beautiful romantic poem! Love to read it again :-) A favorite for sure dear friend Silent One.
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Date: 2/17/2024 1:39:00 PM
Dearest Silent One, Your poem, transported me to a breathtaking world created with the softest hints of imagination. It's a masterclass in evoking atmosphere, and as I read, I could practically feel the cool caress of twilight and the twinkle of the starlit sky. My favorite element is how you create sensory details with emotional resonance. It's as if you've bottled the very essence of a magical dusk. But, the poem goes beyond mere landscape. You inject a powerful human element with allowing their "elated souls to take flight." The merging with darkness, illuminated by the "ebony night," speaks to the liberating and intimate essence of love. Excellent! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/17/2024 1:10:00 PM
What a great opening line S, and the lines that follow, only add to the flow of beauty, your train of thoughts are beautiful, as always, :)
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Date: 2/17/2024 12:59:00 PM
- Beautiful and romantic ... gave me a wonderful image "An air of perfumed peace whispers in pomegranate skies, celestial sensations glow as lavender clouds comprise" - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend, my friend :) - hugs
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Date: 2/17/2024 12:26:00 PM
Ahhh!!! Flowery words of descriptiveness. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 2/17/2024 11:37:00 AM
Your "Rapture" is a lovely write with a great ending. "Good Luck." Have a wonderful day/week to come...............
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Date: 2/17/2024 11:29:00 AM
The beautiful scene described here is rapture in itself, and is very conducive to romance. Your poem brilliantly addresses the contest topic, and I wish you the best of luck with this amazing entry. :)
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Date: 2/17/2024 11:11:00 AM
There is enchantment at night when the heavens light up, Very nicely done Silent
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