Akanksha Ayantika Poet Lyric

Rapture

I spent years wondering 
If romance is a liar
A lure into fiction
Of sweet satire.

I thought it was wise
To detest my desire
I pictured frozen blood
In place of glowing fire. 

The first time I saw 
Love in your eyes
I witnessed art, 
A transcending rise. 

Your lucent words like 
A meteor in motion capture
It was the first time 
I felt cosmic rapture. 

With you by my side
I am in euphoric capture
And since, I believe
Romance is rapture. 




6th April 2023


Contest: Writing Challenge R words 
Sponsor: Constance La France

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Linda Alice Fowler April 8, 2023 at 10:51 AM Romantic rapture - surely romance is not a liar Akanksha. Congratulations on your win! :) Akanksha Ayantika April 8, 2023 at 11:54 AM Thank you Linda! Sweet of you to comment

Anne-Lise Andresen April 7, 2023 at 1:06 PM - Lovely written, Akanksha :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) . hugs Akanksha Ayantika April 7, 2023 at 5:21 PM Thank you:)

Christuraj Alex April 6, 2023 at 9:18 PM A very beautiful lyric. The doubt about romance, "A lure into fiction Of sweet satire" - is beautifully pictured. Congratulations! Akanksha Ayantika April 7, 2023 at 2:06 AM Thank you so much!!:)

Constance La France April 6, 2023 at 8:33 PM Akanksha, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations. ! Akanksha Ayantika April 7, 2023 at 2:07 AM Thank you Constance, for the contest and comment~