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Rapture

I spent years wondering If romance is a liar A lure into fiction Of sweet satire. I thought it was wise To detest my desire I pictured frozen blood In place of glowing fire. The first time I saw Love in your eyes I witnessed art, A transcending rise. Your lucent words like A meteor in motion capture It was the first time I felt cosmic rapture. With you by my side I am in euphoric capture And since, I believe Romance is rapture. 6th April 2023 Contest: Writing Challenge R words Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 4/8/2023 10:51:00 AM
Romantic rapture - surely romance is not a liar Akanksha. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/8/2023 11:54:00 AM
Thank you Linda! Sweet of you to comment
Date: 4/7/2023 1:06:00 PM
- Lovely written, Akanksha :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) . hugs
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/7/2023 5:21:00 PM
Thank you:)
Date: 4/6/2023 9:18:00 PM
A very beautiful lyric. The doubt about romance, "A lure into fiction Of sweet satire" - is beautifully pictured. Congratulations!
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/7/2023 2:06:00 AM
Thank you so much!!:)
Date: 4/6/2023 8:33:00 PM
Akanksha, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations. !
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/7/2023 2:07:00 AM
Thank you Constance, for the contest and comment~

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