Rapture

Rapture

Alleluia approaches
 Emerging from Eternity’s gauzy scrim
Rehearsing its lines
Through trampled palm branches
 Iron nails
  Thorns
   And cross beams
    Raised between pure Heaven
     And haunted earth
To shatter rocks of primeval time
 Into stony dust
That bows before
The Prince of Heaven
 Wrapped in life’s breath again
Victory’s rapture
 Exuberant and ecstatic entwined
Passion’s passionate transformation
Anointed joy walks once more
 Among the lepers and the lame 
 On nail-scarred feet
In the forever season
Shouting
ALLELUIA!!!

4-4-23
Contest: Writing Challenge “R” Words
Sponsor: Constance LaFrance
3rd Place

4-4-23
Contest: Free Submission
Sponsor: Sotto Poet
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Fowler Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 10:42 AM
Love this beautifully spiritual tale Sam. Congratulations on your win! :)
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 2:07 AM
- Congratulations on your win in Contest: Free Submission, Sam :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 11:48 PM
A miraculous poem Sam Congratulations.
Kauffman Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 10:16 AM
Thank you so much Wendy! Writing this poem brought me into the miracle of Easter in a very special way. Sending you all the blessings of the Easter season! Hope you had a wonderful celebration.
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 1:00 PM
- A beautiful poem ... perfect to read at Easter, Sam - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Kauffman Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 10:15 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much! I was inspired by a book by Max Lucado, The Final Week in the Life of Jesus, that takes us through each day of Holy Week then Easter. Writing this poem became a pilgrim's journey to Easter! Hoping you are well. Sending you all the blessings of the Easter season! Hugs!
La France Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 8:37 PM
Sam, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations. !
Kauffman Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 11:24 AM
Many thanks Constance! I usually try to write something for Easter and I was stuck until your contest prompts! So grateful for that inspiration and for your placement! Sending you gratitude and all the blessings of the Easter season!
Poet Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 8:16 PM
Unable to quit pondering this insightful poem; your thoughts are profound and uplifting. Congratulations on your podium win dear, Sam.
Kauffman Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 12:56 PM
Lasaad, so thankful for your beautiful message! I am uplifted by your lovely compliments and feedback. There is no greater compliment from a fellow pilgrim on the journey that to know these words linger with you and uplift you. Thank you for that precious gift. Sending you blessings of Easter joy in this season of Alleluia dear friend!!
Seeker Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 7:16 PM
A powerful spiritual write ~ enjoyed from start to fiendish. Outstanding poem, Sam, warmest congratulations on your win
Kauffman Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 12:52 PM
Thank you so much Seeker. It seems to me that Alleluia is our shout in this eternal season of joy - season of transformation! I hope you had a wonderful celebration of Easter! Blessings!
Peck Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 2:08 PM
This is beautiful and full of love, Sam, especially 'through trampled palm branches, iron nails, thorns...' Best of luck in contest!
Kauffman Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 5:12 PM
Thank you so much Ann! I usually try to write something for Easter each year but I just kept coming up empty until Constance's contest prompts lead me to the theme of rapture - so perfect for Easter. Have a wonderful week and an Easter filled with joy!
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