Rapture

“Self-limit not God’s bliss, that is ours to claim ~ Becoming living light, we fulfil life’s aim” ~ quote by poet Given that what comes and goes is unreal, it’s futile pursuing objects of desire and so ceasing thinking, let’s begin to feel magnetism divine sublime, our inner fire, which renews forever, humming bliss appeal, being but our soul’s light, we seek to acquire. When our false self dies, this bliss is ours to hold, rapture without end, that cannot be controlled. 03-April-2023 ___________ Writing Challenge - 'R' Words Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France HMS, Rhymezone, PS Grammar
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Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 12:34 PM
- Lovely poem ... congratulations on your first place in the contest, U.S. - hugs
Fowler Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 7:58 AM
Succinct and not so subtle. Great one! Congratulations on your win! :)
George Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 4:51 AM
Love the poem and the quote. "When our false self dies, this bliss is ours to hold, rapture without end, that cannot be controlled". Absolutely true. Congratulations Seeker friend on your first place win.
Seeker Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 5:22 AM
Thank you dear Valsa
Alex Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 8:50 PM
"rapture without end" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Seeker Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 12:41 AM
Thank you, Chris
La France Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 8:21 PM
Seeker, outstanding writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge. !
Seeker Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 12:41 AM
Thanks for hosting, Constance ~ big effort on your part
Poet Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 8:09 PM
We are unable to quit pondering this insightful poem; your thoughts are profound and uplifting. Congratulations on your podium win.
Seeker Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 12:41 AM
Thank you, SP! So happy these words resonate in your glowing heart
Daniel Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 5:54 AM
Nice, US, never tried out this form... :)
Seeker Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 8:20 AM
It’s a great form, a cross between a Dizain and a sonnet, more or less
Rolland Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 12:48 AM
enlightning poem, we can't stop thinking, your thoughts are deep and elevating , peaceful and "enjoyable", great penning yann
Seeker Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 1:17 AM
Thank you, yann
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