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Rapture

The goal of life is rapture. Art is the way we experience it. Joseph Campbell
A calm, unpretentious, breathtaking connection, A hypnotic glimpse of Zen-alike delightful flection. Spirit healing serenade into the borderline, A serenity of a viable pond is lost in perfection.   The laconic calmness that is invoked and divine. A magic soul, soaring in sync with heaven's shine, untying of mind and soul from bowing emptiness. A sigh of solace is followed by another whine. Achieving inner peace and tackling stealthiness. Silky ripples, awash in tranquility and richness, Innate calm is layered with rustical sylvan charm. Embraced by the arms of unwavering prettiness, Words began to ooze from the scarlet smarm. This work was iconic; I've never seen a palm. She moved ecstatically; she had no tale to tell. Defeating demons and surviving a swarm Dance, dance akin to a child before he fell. Lose your inhibitions below orbs and spell In the glow of affection, dance to the glee. Dance, dance, as a baby learns to quell Dance is a trick to happiness and ecstasy. Dance is the dialect of a huge banshee. Dance is a specific way to discover your mood.  Dancing before a kid is dangling on his knee. Written: April 02, 2023 1st place contest winner Writing Challenge - 'R' Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France
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Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 12:31 PM
- A beautiful poem, Las ... congratulations on your first place in the contest :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 7:53 AM
Terrific writing that I am accustomed from you Las. Congratulations on your win! :)
George Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 3:58 AM
Hearty Congratulations on your well deserved first place win, dear friend .
La France Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 8:18 PM
Sotto, outstanding writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations. !
Alex Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 8:08 PM
"Dance is a trick to happiness and ecstasy" - The entire poem is beautifully written. Congratulations!
Seeker Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 7:13 PM
Resplendent with soul’s innate vibrancy! Warmest congratulations on your win, SP
George Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 10:14 PM
The poem is vibrant with life and pulsing with sweet rhythm ! All the Best in the contest dear Lasaad !
Pandit Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 6:15 AM
Dwelling in poetic art my friend. I hear voice of peaceful happy sentiments.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 1:30 AM
Excellent poem. Loved the last part.
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