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This town, this Silk Road had no toll to pay
  yet from the east caravans again fill its
pharaonic marble and glass temples. Monolith

malls rise its clefts, eco-wilderness morph
  into multiplex cinemas; mini golf 
and carparks - the 20th century gold fields.

A new rush of debit credit borrow sorrow
  where the mortgage belt go to covet,
to con themselves - live beyond their means.

Here the sweatshops of Asia are legitimised
  and exploitation of trafficked slave,
child, immigrant, and asylum seeker for sale -

here the suffering of others is repackaged,
  bulk sold, discounted - a great lie
perpetrated on human aspiration! Seven billion

sins for a spoil and a ransom in higher income
  streams of consciousness while our mills,
our plants, our factories are rusting graveyards.

Showrooms fill with pizza ovens; microwaves;
  big screen TVs; IKEA; nouveau riche kitsch…
supermarkets of genetically modified superfoods

nuked in cryogel flavour enhancers; sweeteners;
  emulsifiers; stabilisers; MSG; palm oil
and sodium nitrate for the hooked toxin addicts

of convenience - a fill that knows no limits.
  And saints of haute couture bow down
before the anorexic altar of the Fatted Calf…

to the guilt offerings of culture spin. Already
  the subliminal wave is a raging tsunami,
and we a ship of fools on the rising tide blown

on a contrary wind. I fear my quiet desperation -
  the cold ironies of fate; spiritual paralysis;
I fear for the blitzkrieg’s raw collateral damage…

the billboards; vandals of corporate graffiti;
  drive-thrus of Americana; that uglified 
futuristic aesthetic of mirrored urban jungles

and high towers of critical mass; naked ideology.
  I fear the currency of political correctness;
of usury where the end justifies the means;

alas the black dawn into planned obsolescence 
  where ravenous jackals and wolves feed
on the carcass of idle idealism…mythology!

And whores of dystopia; pimps; moneylenders;
  oracles of the grand evangelical sell who
divide and conquer! Lepers walking its streets;

necromancers and fools; mad Scientologists 
  at my gate; the cults and hubris of men
dividing God from Godless; good from evil.

What now of my chimera? What of my anti-hero 
  anachronisms? Sadly one day I must leave
but today I write my rant. Listen! This town

this pastoral lay has become to my ear an echo
  dumb of sound - to my tangential thoughts
a place and past of no return…a time that was!


              Written: September 1994

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Date: 10/12/2023 4:34:00 PM
A long poem that kept me enchanted. This was a writng of pertinent thoughts.
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