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Randomling Doorways

Doors one My thoughts wander moving from one door to the next I try my best Desperately wanting to make my escape Doors two When I opened my door you were the last person I mean the very last person I expected to see Please take your foot out of my door we have nothing to talk about Doors Three I have studied for years the art of making a deal many hours in front of a screen "I'll take what's behind door number two!" ZONK..................so sad :0( For Mary Oliver Rotman's Randomling contest. I hope I got the form right. Either way I had fun.

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/30/2015 1:54:00 AM

Richard, nice theme!!! I want to try this form but I truly can't understand... lucks in the contest!!!~Olive Eloisa =')

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/30/2015 8:42:00 AM

Thanks Olive, I just winged it.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/29/2015 3:46:00 PM

the title of this one intrigued me; i like poems like this that give different angles on a single subject; the form is an interesting one, but i haven't heard of it before...thanks for your comment on my walkabout poem, it pleased me because i was aiming for an hallucinatory feel

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/29/2015 5:20:00 PM

You succeeded! I read it to my wife, it was very impactful.

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/17/2015 5:33:00 PM

Haha, I loved that show "Let's Make A Deal" I enjoyed how all your ramblings fit together, you are awesome :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/29/2015 5:20:00 PM

Thanks Casarah. Hugs Rick.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/17/2015 8:34:00 AM

I like these little snipits Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/17/2015 2:48:00 PM

Thanks Tim, I thought I would give it a go.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2015 10:47:00 AM

Richard, your guess is as good as mine on how to do the contest. I have an idea (I think anything under 7 lines or so is good, just so it's not a limerick) I am just confused by what topics she might prefer and whether she wants all one topic or not. I have mine ready to post, eventually. Mine are rhyming types. I think it does not matter and i hope we can do a mixture of forms. I guess we will all find out when she judges.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/17/2015 2:50:00 PM

I just went with what came from my thoughts, righr or wrong it is what it is. Thanks for visiting.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2015 10:47:00 AM

Ooops, I ran out of space!! Anyway, here is what I wanted to say at the end of that last comment: I enjoyed these, and am pleased to learn that such a skilled writer as yourself is a VIRGO!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/17/2015 2:51:00 PM

You are kind Andrea, it seems I am in very talented company!

Paul Callus

Date: 8/16/2015 9:53:00 AM

I think you have caught the true spirit of this form, Richard. The door topic makes for lovely random writes, something you might wish to elaborate on later on. // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/17/2015 2:52:00 PM

Who knows Paul , I may come back to them. Thanks for stopping by to read them.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/15/2015 1:38:00 PM

A very beautiful write Kim, it is lovely and excellence........A.M.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2015 2:01:00 PM

It's Richard but I guess Kim will do. Thanks for commenting.

Constance La France

Date: 8/15/2015 9:59:00 AM

Richard, this is a great series of randomlings for the contest a7 and best of luck and thanks for visiting my poem, beloved sister love, sadly this is not imaginary but my reality . .

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2015 2:00:00 PM

So sorry to hear that, you have had more than your share of losses. Hugs Rick.

Darlene Gifford

Date: 8/15/2015 9:23:00 AM

Wow! You really jumped on that form, after reading mine, Richard. Great write. A 7. ~~Darlene

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2015 9:39:00 AM

Thanks Darlene, it is good to bend our mids around new ideas.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/15/2015 9:03:00 AM

I love it, turned out very good and amusing a 7 and good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2015 9:03:00 AM

Thanks Eileen, hugs back.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2015 9:03:00 AM

Hi Eve, thanks.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/15/2015 9:00:00 AM

Very intriguing write, Richard. I don't know what this form is all about, but the poem is good. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2015 9:04:00 AM

I'm not sure if I got it right but it was fun trying. Hugs Rick.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/15/2015 8:38:00 AM

great string of poems Richard good luck in the contest - especially like the middle one:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2015 8:58:00 AM

Thanks Jan, hugs Rick.