Random Thoughts: Part 2

Random Thoughts: Part 2
Sitting here with Random Thoughts on the Mind,
Not a care in the World, I'm leaving them behind;
Things started to unravel, doesn't matter anymore,
I shut myself off from it all, and slammed the door;
This isn't about anyone, not perticularly at all,
It's me sharing feeling's, trying to break down my wall;
So many people have hurt me in my present and the Past,
That no matter how hard I try its like an unbeatable task;
To break down this wall and let new people come in,
Then someone comes along and it seems like I win;
Only to be denied happiness, like life's a crule joke,
In the end its always me dying because my heart is broke;
I kick and I swing, always trying to fight;
For what I believe in, I want A "Good" Life;
No matter where I go it happens the same,
Again and again like I'm some kinda lame;
Shouldn't Trust Noone, that's not the life That I live,
I Want to find someone, my whole heart to give;
It's out there, out there for the taking,
Maybe that's why my heart keeps on breaking;
Maybe I should hide it away, like I have for most of my years,
That would solve everything, that would Quick-Dry the Tears;
This isn't something I'm selling, or anything I bought,
This is Just Part 2, Of My Random Thoughts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 7/4/2009 5:45:00 AM
"i shut myself off from it all and slammed the door":Great=) and the ending:This is just part 2 of my random thoughts... *** Beautifyl ***
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