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Random Randomlings For Contest

A weight off my mind I wish the scales Would fall from my eyes When I stand and weigh myself The scales don’t tell me any lies Telling Porkie Pies Have you heard the saying ‘I’m as happy as a pig in muck’ Well I’ve just had a mud bath Then why don’t I smell like bacon To do or not to do… that is the Question. A point to ponder… Why do I tidy the house Only for it to get messed up again It’s a vicious circle If I leave the mess Will I maintain the status quo? What is Randomling Contest? Sponsor - Mary Oliver Rotman 9th August 2015
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Fraser Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 2:37 PM
Love your randomlings Jan, and I'm loving your mind more and more. Never stop, never change, keep your range // James xxxx
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 2:40 PM
I'll always try and make you proud James:-) hugs jan xx
Konos Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 1:39 PM
That's 3 Good Uns....Thanks
Allison Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 2:00 PM
Thanks Judy I really was rambling when I wrote these lol:-) hugs jan xx
Callus Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 1:45 PM
Random thoughts they might be, but they make a lot of sense. ~ I keep planning to write this, that and the other, but time is going by too quick! ~ Hugs // paul
Callus Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 2:09 PM
The ladies have been having fun:) They'll be back Thursday. ~ Glad the break did you good:)
Allison Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 1:47 PM
I try to only post one poem a day unless a contest is filling fast:-) I do worry about where my muse takes me some days lol:-) hope the ladies are having fun - we are in Ireland back home tomorrow but i feel rested:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 3:26 PM
Random rambling but good rambling a 7 and good luck in the contest Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 5:11 PM
Definitely ramblings with me lol:-) hugs jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 5:54 AM
Randomling like this is what poetry is all about, dear Jean! Good luck!
Allison Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 5:10 PM
I don't know if it was randomling or rambling lol:-) hugs jan xx
May Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 3:47 AM
Nicely penned Jan...best wishes in the contest
Allison Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 4:12 AM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 11:48 PM
Loved this Jan, that middle photo, is that someone I know?
Allison Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 4:12 AM
Yes Arthur, sadly shes put on a bit of weight since you last saw her but she still has that stunning smile!:-( hugs Jan
La France Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 7:57 PM
Jan, these ramblings are great for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my train poem
Allison Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 4:11 AM
thanks Broken wings:-) hugs jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 5:25 PM
superlative rambling Jan hugs 7
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 5:31 PM
LOL - just crazy thoughts that came in my head - a fun write:-) hugs jan xx
Nayak Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 11:40 AM
Dear Jan, Awesome this randomlings are!!! Good luck for the contest:-) Love, Anu
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 2:57 PM
Thanks so much Anu:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 10:20 AM
that is so cool how you took random sayings or pictures and did three of these. I was just gonna do one! Maybe this one is gonna fill really fast. I better get on it. Soupmail for ya.
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 11:19 AM
I just wrote 3 silly random poems Andrea just a bit of fun - hope it is what Mary is after:-) hugs janxx
Smith Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 8:36 AM
This form reminds me of George Carlin. He used to have things that make him go hmmmmm. Saw him in Vegas once. I think I nearly pee'd my pants. Yours made me go hmmmmm
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 8:43 AM
I take that as a compliment Tim - had no idea what to do for this contest then these silly random ideas formed in my head:-) Maybe I need to see someone about my thoughts lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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