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Feb.22.2024
Rambling, Rundown,Rapture Words Poetry Contest
Sponsor. Constance La France
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RAMBLING

" Nature is gorgeous, opening wider vistas of paramount beauty and variety. Leave your cloistered existence and ramble through the hidden pockets of Nature. You'll be amazed at God's craftsmanship"~ By Poet


After the dull and wintry day, Has dawned a bright and sunny day. Stop my friends your indoor play, Into the countryside, let us stray. We shall watch the beauty on our way. Listen to the songs of merry Jay. Enjoy the flowers on every tree, Those that sway in pleasant glee. Let us sing a merry song, As we ramble joyfully along. Let us wander all day long, As to the rural folk we belong. Far into the woods we shall go, Where there graze the deer and the doe. We may spot the fawn at play, Down the hills a little away. We shall watch the birds that fly, Up and up into the farther sky. Also squirrels that bark on trees, And listen to the hum of honeybees. We should wind our way to the hill, With safe steps and rising thrill. Leaving behind the dust and dirt, Taking breaks in every leafy covert. We shall roam into the valley below, Where the trees are planted in a row. Some are laden with juicy plum. Shall pluck n’ eat them yum, yum, yum!
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La France Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 5:48 AM
Valsa, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive poem, I love the image and quote too, Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
February 28, 2024 at 8:34 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write/ending/quote/fun picture. Yes, Nature is Gorgeous... I was there. Have a great/fun day writing away...............
Poet Avatar
February 28, 2024 at 4:54 AM
Dear Valsa, back with hearty congratulations on your trophy win,
Anaya Avatar
February 27, 2024 at 9:26 AM
I always enjoy your nature poems, Valsa. Congratulations on your win!
Edmonds  Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 6:37 PM
A lovely ramble your poem takes the readers on Valsa, an enjoyable read… Beryl
Poet Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 11:24 AM
This exquisite poem is a testament to your remarkable talent, Valsa. The impeccable couplets adorned with vivid imagery and impeccable rhymes are truly a sight to behold. The beauty of nature is magnified through your masterful craftsmanship, rendering it even more resplendent. Your whimsical exploration of the woods, a delightful manifestation of free-spiritedness, further enriches the composition.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 10:22 AM
Excellent couplets with its imagery and great rhymes. Nature is indeed gorgeous. and you made it even more so.
Narain Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 9:41 AM
Nice free spirited rambling in the woods.
DiMino Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 9:29 AM
Delightful! So long since I have walked in a meadow or orchid. Thank God for my healthy, plentiful garden. Always feed the birds and gently shoo the cats -- little rascals, you got to love them also.
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 5:52 AM
Excellent couplets describing the joy of a walk in nature and enjoying the bounty that it freely gives us. Thanks for sharing your work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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