Raised By Everyone

When I was a child everyone’s mother on my block corrected me.
Every adult in the neighborhood watched me vigilantly, carefully.
Watching for me to do something wrong,
So they could call my mother.
On the way to school I sometimes took a risk,
Knowing full well I’d get a spanking when I got home.
Sometimes it was worth it.
On a daily basis, I was called to a variety of porches to apologize.
This was the 60’s
In a small Iowa town.
It’s the way it was.
None of us questioned it.
One Wednesday Mr. Joe
Came out on his porch
And yelled, “If you don’t stop dawdling,
You’ll be late for the bell!”
We did not know what dawdling was,
But my sister and I ran to school,
Sliding into our desk seats seconds
Before the bell rang.
Mr. Joe had saved us from 
Staying after school with the teacher.
We started waving at him every day after that.
“We are going to play hooky” I told my twin sister one fine day.
We were on our way back to second grade, after a hot bowl of
Tomato soup with a zillion crackers, and an ice cold milk I refused
To drink because I hate milk.
When Mom’s car pulled up
My blood ran cold.
My sister started screaming and
Ran right to her.
I was much more difficult to catch.
Neighbors ran out to tell her where
I was hiding every fifteen feet.
I got switched all the way
Back to school,
And decided I hated 
Neighbors.
No child could have been
Snatched by a stranger
In my home town in
The 60’s.
They would have had him
Down on the ground under
 A sea of knees before
He finished his first 
Sentence to us kids.
We were loved, protected, and raised by everybody.
Watched as closely as caramel candy at Christmas time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Saxena Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 3:05 AM
A nice cute feeling...
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March 13, 2018 at 7:26 AM
Good, then it succeeded.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 5:25 AM
A lovely write!
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March 13, 2018 at 7:26 AM
Thank you, Kim. Thanks for your visit.
Gauthier Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 3:59 PM
Lovely. Love your poem, Caren.
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March 10, 2018 at 7:07 PM
Thank you, Line. I look forward to your comments.
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