Rainy Days and Mondays

It's Monday The day of the dead leaves and fresh flowers The dry and wet hours Like the other days Of life and death The desert and the lake Thousands of the little ponds The debris waiting for the mansion Farmers stacking the hay The trains that run every day It's Monday It's raining As it rained last Friday too The leaves whisper With the caterpillars The rivers playing football The children of water The toad is in laughter The breezes leave rustles in the blades The larks look on The flood has robbed a family of life The relatives weep The rains stop a little and smile The window down under my heart Calls me It was on a Monday too Only yesterday as it were Do you remember? Your permanent shadow Arrived on my canvas The dream painting I am still doing The rain got jealous It came down on the shadows heavily The time got flooded As the water receded A little plant raised its head Got blended with my butter and bread Moon-flower in the dream The sunbeams woke me up Whenever Monday is accompanied By the rains The pains of the window Call me to you With the windows holding the flowery hues I look for the brushes To pick the colour For the shadows of the rustles Slowly and softly The gladioli _____________________________ February 21, 2018 Rainy Days And Mondays - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One
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Hoffman Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 8:38 PM
Awesome display of emotion and imagery Probir! Congrats on your well deserved win!~Che :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 6:39 PM
Congrats on your win, Probir. Great imagery.
Gupta Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Thank you , Line ....
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February 23, 2018 at 10:18 PM
Congratulations Probir! Packed with imagery and emotion, a sheer delight to read, top notch poetry. Wonderful win :) xomo!
Gupta Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 5:18 AM
Thank you, Maureen ...
Smith Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 11:20 AM
Bravo Probir, congratulations...
Gupta Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 5:18 AM
Thank you, Charlie ...
Babu Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Probir: Many CONGRATS on your TOP WIN. GREAT Poem. Regards,Sathya
Gupta Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 5:21 AM
Thank you, Sathya Babu ...
Medders Tobechi Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 9:50 AM
An excellent write Probir. I enjoyed the images and the flow. It was a real pleasure to read. Several times. Congratulations.
Gupta Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 5:21 AM
Thank you, Janis ...
Leiser Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 9:15 AM
Remarkably good poem, Probir! Love the unique blend of emotions and imagery! Your poetic voice is beautiful! A fave :)
Gupta Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 5:23 AM
Thank you, Laura ...
Pandit Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 7:09 AM
Congrats Probir on first place win.
Gupta Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 5:23 AM
Thank you, Vijay ...
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:32 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Probir :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:34 AM
Thank you, Sunshine
One Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 5:43 AM
Such an amazing poem, full of vivid imagery of a rainy day and it flows so well.. Congratulations on your first place
Gupta Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:35 AM
Thank you, Silent, for the delightful placement ...
La France Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Probir, I love this poem, well done !
Gupta Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:37 AM
Aww ... glad to see you in this window after quite sometime ... thank you ...
Williams Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 2:13 AM
A really great poem Probir, full of imagery.I love the line "the rain got jealous', I was listening to a song the other day, with a line something like that. Good luck in the contest....Maria
Gupta Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 4:25 AM
yes ... and there is a good reason for the rain to be jealous! ... thank you Maria for liking my lines ...
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February 21, 2018 at 6:30 PM
I like the rich imagery of your poem, Probir. Good luck in the contest. I love the line "your permanent shadow arrived on my canvas".
Gupta Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 4:30 AM
Does it not arrive when it rains? ... and taps against your veins? ... thanks,Agnes for liking the imagery ...
Pandit Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 8:46 AM
You painted the scenes of dreadful rainy Mondays very well Probir. Awesome imagery in your poem. Best for a win.
Gupta Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 11:20 AM
Very nice ... Barry finds it delightful whereas you feel it is dreadful ... This is the mystery of poetry ... Be that as it may, Vijay , in no poem of mine I have ever highlighted dreadful aspects and this poem is no exception ...
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February 21, 2018 at 7:43 AM
Delightful poem, Probir. Good luck in the contest. Definitely +Fav. // Barry
Gupta Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 11:22 AM
Thank you, Barry for your appreciation of the spirit of the poem ...
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