Rainy Days and Mondays

It's Monday The day of the dead leaves and fresh flowers The dry and wet hours Like the other days Of life and death The desert and the lake Thousands of the little ponds The debris waiting for the mansion Farmers stacking the hay The trains that run every day It's Monday It's raining As it rained last Friday too The leaves whisper With the caterpillars The rivers playing football The children of water The toad is in laughter The breezes leave rustles in the blades The larks look on The flood has robbed a family of life The relatives weep The rains stop a little and smile The window down under my heart Calls me It was on a Monday too Only yesterday as it were Do you remember? Your permanent shadow Arrived on my canvas The dream painting I am still doing The rain got jealous It came down on the shadows heavily The time got flooded As the water receded A little plant raised its head Got blended with my butter and bread Moon-flower in the dream The sunbeams woke me up Whenever Monday is accompanied By the rains The pains of the window Call me to you With the windows holding the flowery hues I look for the brushes To pick the colour For the shadows of the rustles Slowly and softly The gladioli _____________________________ February 21, 2018 Rainy Days And Mondays - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One
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Date: 2/25/2018 8:38:00 PM
Awesome display of emotion and imagery Probir! Congrats on your well deserved win!~Che :)
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Date: 2/24/2018 6:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Probir. Great imagery.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/25/2018 9:08:00 AM
Thank you , Line ....
Date: 2/23/2018 10:18:00 PM
Congratulations Probir! Packed with imagery and emotion, a sheer delight to read, top notch poetry. Wonderful win :) xomo!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/24/2018 5:18:00 AM
Thank you, Maureen ...
Date: 2/23/2018 11:20:00 AM
Bravo Probir, congratulations...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/24/2018 5:18:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie ...
Date: 2/23/2018 10:35:00 AM
Probir: Many CONGRATS on your TOP WIN. GREAT Poem. Regards,Sathya
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Date: 2/24/2018 5:21:00 AM
Thank you, Sathya Babu ...
Date: 2/23/2018 9:50:00 AM
An excellent write Probir. I enjoyed the images and the flow. It was a real pleasure to read. Several times. Congratulations.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/24/2018 5:21:00 AM
Thank you, Janis ...
Date: 2/23/2018 9:15:00 AM
Remarkably good poem, Probir! Love the unique blend of emotions and imagery! Your poetic voice is beautiful! A fave :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/24/2018 5:23:00 AM
Thank you, Laura ...
Date: 2/23/2018 7:09:00 AM
Congrats Probir on first place win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/24/2018 5:23:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay ...
Date: 2/23/2018 6:32:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Probir :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/23/2018 6:34:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine
Date: 2/23/2018 5:43:00 AM
Such an amazing poem, full of vivid imagery of a rainy day and it flows so well.. Congratulations on your first place
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/23/2018 6:35:00 AM
Thank you, Silent, for the delightful placement ...
Date: 2/22/2018 7:26:00 PM
Probir, I love this poem, well done !
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/23/2018 6:37:00 AM
Aww ... glad to see you in this window after quite sometime ... thank you ...
Date: 2/22/2018 2:13:00 AM
A really great poem Probir, full of imagery.I love the line "the rain got jealous', I was listening to a song the other day, with a line something like that. Good luck in the contest....Maria
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/22/2018 4:25:00 AM
yes ... and there is a good reason for the rain to be jealous! ... thank you Maria for liking my lines ...
Date: 2/21/2018 6:30:00 PM
I like the rich imagery of your poem, Probir. Good luck in the contest. I love the line "your permanent shadow arrived on my canvas".
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/22/2018 4:30:00 AM
Does it not arrive when it rains? ... and taps against your veins? ... thanks,Agnes for liking the imagery ...
Date: 2/21/2018 8:46:00 AM
You painted the scenes of dreadful rainy Mondays very well Probir. Awesome imagery in your poem. Best for a win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/21/2018 11:20:00 AM
Very nice ... Barry finds it delightful whereas you feel it is dreadful ... This is the mystery of poetry ... Be that as it may, Vijay , in no poem of mine I have ever highlighted dreadful aspects and this poem is no exception ...
Date: 2/21/2018 7:43:00 AM
Delightful poem, Probir. Good luck in the contest. Definitely +Fav. // Barry
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/21/2018 11:22:00 AM
Thank you, Barry for your appreciation of the spirit of the poem ...
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