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Rainy Days and Mondays

My eyes are filling with the disdain of rain, no ease in sight for the reign of this pain- I’ve been slain, with an ebony stain- (Is Monday to blame for me going insane?) Deep inside my soul there is a resonating hole, it aches for love to fulfill passion until its full- Life took its toll, happiness it stole- (Is Monday to blame for me losing control?) What does a day have to do with rain anyway? it must be Sunday has found a way to betray- The torment must stay, unforgiveness I did portray- (Is Monday to blame for me not being okay?) If only I could find a combination that is right, find eased alleviation to end this awful fight- No end in sight, my heart devoid of light- (Is Monday to blame for my heart being contrite?) When it rains for hours it kills the pretty flowers, I am left all alone as my essence cowers- Suffering shall devour, I lost all my power- (Is Monday the reason I became a great coward?) Rainy days without rainbows know nothing of affection- Monday must be the reason I lost my cherished connection. Rainy Days and Mondays Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One February 19, 2018

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Date: 2/24/2018 6:49:00 PM
Witty delivery, Laura. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/24/2018 3:52:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your great win.A nicely flowing poem.
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Date: 2/23/2018 2:53:00 PM
"As my essence cowers" dramatic and so strong !You must be a powerful woman also.. Enjoyed so much. Congrats. bbn
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Date: 2/23/2018 6:26:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win, Laura :) - Hugs and Happy Weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2018 5:48:00 AM
Monday is not to blame, it is all in your head lol.. Great take on the contest Laura Loo... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/25/2018 2:12:00 AM
no really Mondays are useless in my house, lol jk thank you!!! :) -luloooo
Date: 2/22/2018 1:40:00 PM
May all your Mondays bring you glee, and remember rain maintains life. You poem sad, but a winning entry! Mick
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/25/2018 2:11:00 AM
thank you dear Mick : )-luloo
Date: 2/21/2018 2:25:00 PM
Woo, it got dark, and you did the dark quite well, you delivered. I'm running off now because I need something funny quick. Good luck with this realistic, emotional pain riddled cry called a poem. You done good. All the best ... CayCay
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/25/2018 2:11:00 AM
thank you sweet CayCay :)-luloo
Date: 2/19/2018 4:59:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem, Luloo - this should do very well in the contest.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/25/2018 2:10:00 AM
many thanks Agnes :) -luloo
Date: 2/19/2018 12:40:00 PM
Wonderful take on the theme and awesome delivery. Well done, Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/25/2018 2:10:00 AM
thank you sweet Line :) luloo

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