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Rainy Days

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Colorful umbrellas pop up as rain pours down And through the rain they walk, For these showers they embrace Stepping to the the rhythm of the rain. Why stay inside on rainy days And give sunny days all the fun, Enjoy the raindrops on your skin As you would a ray of sun And by seizing this rainy day With umbrellas shining bright They seem to take an upward flight To form a rainbow of their own --- 9-13-18 A Rainy Day Contest Sponsor: Sara Kendrick Photo # 4

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/17/2018 1:42:00 PM

Hello Joseph, I love the rainy days. I enjoy to walk in the rain. Have a nice day my friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/7/2018 5:12:00 PM

I really like the rhythm and flow of this one, Joseph. I like the way that you work the idea of Carpe Diem into the lines. Thank you for participating in my contest. Congrats on your winning work. Sara

Joseph May
Date: 10/7/2018 6:44:00 PM

Thank you for my placement Sara

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/4/2018 12:45:00 PM

EXCELLENT! All the best

Ralph Sergi

Date: 9/23/2018 9:42:00 AM

Ilove the way the umbrella compliments the rainbow. WELL DONE!

Silent One

Date: 9/20/2018 9:48:00 AM

I can relate.. has not stopped raining all morning!!!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/19/2018 8:59:00 PM

Excellent, Joseph--made me smile! Janice

Mark Peterson

Date: 9/19/2018 3:55:00 PM

This is a lovely metamorphosis you’ve spun and lends a whole new way of relating to rain and of paying more attention to the color of rainbows. Lovely graphic too.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/18/2018 3:41:00 PM

Joseph, enjoyed reading this great poem with great imagery.. Sara's contest Carpe Diem still confuse me. Good luck in the contest ~`* Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2018 8:29:00 PM

This is really cute . Wasn't that a fun contest idea she had?

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/14/2018 8:57:00 AM

Like the ending, Joseph:)

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/14/2018 6:15:00 AM

Let it rain poetic drops...falling from your pen...great write my friend...sure to win...love & light...^WW^

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/14/2018 5:34:00 AM

I really like this Joseph. I like the lines stepping to the rhythm of the rain and why stay inside on rainy days and give sunny days all the fun. Great one! :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/13/2018 10:14:00 PM

I love the uplifting spirit of your poem, Joseph. Your imagery inspires with its joyful beauty, especially your last two lines.. a great end to your lovely write. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan