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Rainy Day Dreams How sweet’s the lovely scent and sound of rain As I look out amidst the sultry storm From bursting clouds upon the window pane, I feel the chills on my svelte body's form. The thrill of thunder claps and lightning too, When shivers crawl and creep along my spine, I'm warm inside with true love's dreams of you. My dreams of kissing you are so divine. Yet you know not my secret thoughts there-of. Perhaps in spring one golden day you'll see How deeply my heart longs to know your love; Of yearning hidden hopes encased in me. *The storms are raging on the rollin' sea, And on the highway of regret* they be. 2-11-20 *The storms are raging on the rollin' sea, and on the highway of regret - Bob Dylan - Make you feel my love ~Second Place~ Famous poetic lines 3 - Love songs Poetry Contest Sponsor Silent One

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Date: 3/25/2020 7:21:00 PM
Hi Connie, firstly, thank you for the wonderful news about your daughter and her baby. It does the heart good to know that everything is not gloom and doom, there is still much to let the light within. This is such a wonderful write. The storm is something that has ever given my heart peace. I feel alive in the midst of a storm. I look at your poem in two ways, Connie, the storm within ourselves and the storm of nature. Your words sing. A fav. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/30/2020 7:08:00 PM
I wrote this specifically for the contest Mike So of course it is fictional. I appreciate that you liked it so much as to fave it. That means a lot to me and I thank you very much for that. I too love the rain and the thrill of a storm. I would not like to be on the sea however during a storm. Keep safe. xxoo
Date: 2/25/2020 7:40:00 PM
Beautiful write and win Connie. Big congrats on your new granddaughter. Big hug.
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Date: 2/26/2020 2:59:00 AM
Thank you Cecilia. I am leaving to see my other granddaughters this Friday. They live on the Big Island of Hawaii. xxoo
Date: 2/24/2020 3:21:00 AM
That is so sweet. I'm so happy for all of your family. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/24/2020 3:50:00 AM
Thank you Silent. Baby only weighs 2.89 lbs. But she is strong and looks well developed so we are all relieved and happy. xxoo
Date: 2/23/2020 8:01:00 PM
Congratulations, Connie, well written.
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Date: 2/23/2020 7:57:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2020 5:45:00 AM
Another poem of yearning, for a loved one...if only it was not a dream.. great take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 2/23/2020 9:21:00 PM
Thank you very much for my second placement Silent. I am celebrating the birth of my new granddaughter who was just born 2 hours ago. She is 7 weeks early but mommy and baby are doing fine. xxoo
Date: 2/22/2020 9:31:00 AM
Your words flow with true beauty. What a gift your soul truly is. Have a beautiful day my friend.
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Date: 2/17/2020 1:37:00 PM
Beautifully written leading to the Bob Dylan line, Connie. Good luck in the contest. // Barry.
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Date: 2/17/2020 1:06:00 PM
I thought she wanted a to z. Good grief. Anyway this is divine
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Date: 2/16/2020 11:02:00 AM
lovely!!
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Date: 2/15/2020 4:23:00 PM
Nice penning Connie, a lovely theme to focus.Over here today in Scotland it's rained non stop with many flood warnings. Hope you're having a better weekend, Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 2/14/2020 8:11:00 PM
Totally love this sonnet, Connie. Perfect. Panagiota xx
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Date: 2/14/2020 7:31:00 PM
oh wow, I was thinking. Did she do this for true love contest or what?? and then I got to the end and saw it was Silent one's cool contest. I need to hanker down and DO this fast. I love this, Connie. thanks for being the only one today to respond to my long-winded email I sent out! You are the greatest!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/14/2020 8:05:00 PM
You are welcome Andrea. Thank you! I hope you are having a wonderful Valentine's Day. My husband is going all out and cooking me lobster. xxoo
Date: 2/14/2020 3:23:00 PM
A lovely write as always Connie. love phyl
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Date: 2/14/2020 6:20:00 PM
Thank you Phyl. I hope you are having a great Valentine's Day! xxoo
Date: 2/14/2020 3:13:00 PM
What would poets do on a stormy day if not for their pens! Great weave around the Dylan quote and good luck in the contest with this exquisitely crafted sonnet. A fav for me. Happy Valentine's Day, Connie! ~ John
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/14/2020 6:19:00 PM
Wow John, thank you so much for such a wonderful comment and of course the Fave! I hope you have a most wonderful Valentine's Day my friend. xxoo
Date: 2/14/2020 2:36:00 PM
Alone...watching out at your heart...I like the sweetness of the write...
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/14/2020 6:18:00 PM
Thank you very much Arturo. I hope you have a lovely Valentine's Day! xxoo
Date: 2/14/2020 12:08:00 PM
Plumeria (frangipani) in your garden can certainly sweeten your daydreams and dreams among the raindrops of life! You've written a cracker! Aloha! Rico
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/14/2020 1:28:00 PM
Thank you Rico. I hope your Valentine's Day is special! xxoo
Date: 2/14/2020 9:14:00 AM
- A beautiful sonnet and a beautiful song by Bob Dylan, dear Connie - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely Valentines day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/14/2020 6:17:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I hope your day is filled with love on this Valentine's Day! xxoo
Date: 2/14/2020 7:40:00 AM
Your day dreams speak beautifully to elevate the theme--a lovely write, as always, Connie. A winning poem in verses of love!
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Date: 2/14/2020 6:17:00 PM
Thank Vijay, for such a sweet comment. I hope you have a wonderful Valentine's Day! xxoo
Date: 2/14/2020 5:13:00 AM
A good cleansing rain is needed, lovely metaphor Connie
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Date: 2/14/2020 6:16:00 PM
Thank you very much TS. It has been raining here all week intermittently, to my delight. Have a lovely Valentine's Day! xxoo
Date: 2/14/2020 2:34:00 AM
Love your interpretation of the line Connie, have seen many inspired by that line, all creative. Of course being my favourite musician ,I chose it too. Good luck. Happy Valentines day. Tom
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/14/2020 6:13:00 PM
Thank you very much Tom. Your entry is superb! Have a wonderful Valentine's Day my friend! xxoo
Date: 2/13/2020 9:32:00 PM
WoW! Connie, You have penned such a well written Sonnet! You used the line from Dylan’s song and wrote a good contender for the contest theme. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful evening:-)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/13/2020 9:45:00 PM
Thank you very much Alexis. Dylan had genius. xxoo
Date: 2/13/2020 8:49:00 PM
Oh yeah! This is wonderful Connie. He wrote so many but you picked one of my favorites. Can you see me smiling?
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Date: 2/13/2020 9:43:00 PM
It is one of my favorites too Daniel and I am also smiling at your comment. Thanks for making me smile. xxoo
Date: 2/13/2020 8:42:00 PM
wow... this is beautiful Connie...the theme really inspired a gorgeous write from you...I can't find time to sit and catch up on here much less write for a contest... best wishes...I love this one! hugs and blessings XoXo
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/13/2020 9:46:00 PM
Thank you for such a great comment Sandra. xxoo