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Raining On My Window

As I sit here looking out my window on a windy blustery rainy day having a break on Scottish west coast relaxed and peaceful despite day so grey Watching these raindrops on the glass they run down going in no straight line some divert right while others go left my eyes are fixed asking is this a sign? At this time of year, end of autumn but entering winter temperatures change so life temperatures are different as well this makes us so inconsistent utterly strange The window represents our image revealing us all to be very clear running into our lives are the rain drops down upon our life so very dear This water effects providentially all of us as these rainy lines picture life so real a slight turn here and these take one on a route destined not ever did feel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/26/2018 10:55:00 AM
Hi Gordon, I am one of those fools who love to walk in the rain. Often I have watched the rain falling down the window and likened the drop to my life. What makes the drop go one way or the other. We are probably due rain soon Gordon. A rainy fave my friend. have a wonderful Friday. your friend always....Mike.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/26/2018 3:37:00 PM
Thanks, Mike, glad you liked it, yes I can sympathise with you indeed a showery rain can be pleasant but anything heavier better to stay inside!, Have blessed weekend, Gordon
Date: 10/26/2018 4:29:00 AM
A poet sees perspective even on a rainy day and boy do we have one here today! :) Be blessed, Gordon!
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/26/2018 6:57:00 AM
Thanks again Kim, glad you was impressed with this one. Have a great day,Gordon
Date: 10/25/2018 3:36:00 AM
- Here on the west coast of Norway ... we know everything about rain and wind :))) - A lovely poem, Gordon - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/25/2018 10:41:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, glad you enjoyed it, hope it's lovely day in Norway, Blessings,Gordon

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