Raining in Summer

Like a welcome Summer rain, humor may suddenly
cleanse and cool the earth, the air and you.
—Langston Hughes

RAINING IN SUMMER

  The little teapot leaned over, steam pours out,
sizzles on the pavement. Trickles, sprinkles,
  waters the subsidiary gardens that sprout -
those pointed out by a grandson. My wrinkles
  curve up as the rain skillfully waters my willow,
my patch of roses and lilies, scattered and rare.

  With Summer storm, I ruminate on a long time ago.
This grand-generation of blessing, not yet a prayer.
  Drip…drop…splosh! The hope of the window pane.
We dream, as the outburst streams down to spill
  our dreams, like seeds giving more than the mundane.
God saturates our lives with more than we will.

  It’s raining Summer all over this land of honey-wheat.
Though droll and gray, a grateful soak gifts a sun rise.
  My flower petals, leaves and boughs bathed in heat
and nourishing drink, replenishing the owls, and other wise.
  Ker-splash, the puddles of inky-mud, stain the shins,
  leave me, us, them, refreshed and sodden with grins.
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George Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 11:34 AM
Congratulations Kim on your win. Cheers.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 3:43 PM
Thank you, Tonye!
Empress Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 12:26 AM
Dear kim, i love the uniqueness of this poem and how descriptively youv woven words and delivered a poem that is fitting for the prompt, theres so much depth in so many lines in this especially “ our dreams, like seeds giving more than the mundane. God saturates our lives with more than we will.” thats just soulfully meaningful! Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Pleasure reading this
Rodrigues Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 3:43 PM
Thank you! I enjoyed writing for your contest!
Kendrick Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 2:56 PM
Ahh!! Refreshing winner. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 6:42 PM
Thank you!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely rain write. Love summer days when it rains with a cup of tea. Come on rain. Hahaha!!! Have A Blessed Day Writing Away With Your Win...........
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 11:26 AM
I can hear your laughing from afar…hehehe Hugs! Thank you, Paula!
Hind Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 5:56 PM
I will fav this- your word flow was perfect and "earthy" that word you like :).....love sitting here reading anything you write....you deserve more recognition <3
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 11:27 AM
You touch my heart! Thank you so much! :)
Williams Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 5:56 AM
A delightful write Kim, Loved it. I love the rain especially when at night and as well as it saves watering the garden LOL. We have been having a lot of unseasonal rain here in Australia. Too much of it - but I'm not complaining - except that the clothes dryer gets a constant workout Lol. Hugs Maria
Rodrigues Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 6:08 AM
LOL! Thank you, Maria! Rain and sunshine work hand in hand. :) Kim
Andresen Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 2:52 AM
- Creatively written about summer rain, Kim ... a wonderful contribution - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 6:09 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! I always appreciate you! xx
DiMino Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:43 AM
"The hope of the window pane. We dream, as the outburst streams down to spill our dreams, like seeds giving more than the mundane." Profoundly beautiful! "Ker-splash, the puddles of inky-mud, stain the shins, leave me, us, them, refreshed and sodden with grins." I'm grinning from brim to overflowing brim. Delightful!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:51 AM
So glad this brought smiles! Hugs ~ Kim
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