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Raining in Summer

Like a welcome Summer rain, humor may suddenly cleanse and cool the earth, the air and you. —Langston Hughes RAINING IN SUMMER The little teapot leaned over, steam pours out, sizzles on the pavement. Trickles, sprinkles, waters the subsidiary gardens that sprout - those pointed out by a grandson. My wrinkles curve up as the rain skillfully waters my willow, my patch of roses and lilies, scattered and rare. With Summer storm, I ruminate on a long time ago. This grand-generation of blessing, not yet a prayer. Drip…drop…splosh! The hope of the window pane. We dream, as the outburst streams down to spill our dreams, like seeds giving more than the mundane. God saturates our lives with more than we will. It’s raining Summer all over this land of honey-wheat. Though droll and gray, a grateful soak gifts a sun rise. My flower petals, leaves and boughs bathed in heat and nourishing drink, replenishing the owls, and other wise. Ker-splash, the puddles of inky-mud, stain the shins, leave me, us, them, refreshed and sodden with grins.

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Date: 6/10/2024 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations Kim on your win. Cheers.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2024 3:43:00 PM
Thank you, Tonye!
Date: 6/8/2024 12:26:00 AM
Dear kim, i love the uniqueness of this poem and how descriptively youv woven words and delivered a poem that is fitting for the prompt, theres so much depth in so many lines in this especially “ our dreams, like seeds giving more than the mundane. God saturates our lives with more than we will.” thats just soulfully meaningful! Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Pleasure reading this
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2024 3:43:00 PM
Thank you! I enjoyed writing for your contest!
Date: 6/5/2024 2:56:00 PM
Ahh!! Refreshing winner. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2024 6:42:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/5/2024 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely rain write. Love summer days when it rains with a cup of tea. Come on rain. Hahaha!!! Have A Blessed Day Writing Away With Your Win...........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2024 11:26:00 AM
I can hear your laughing from afar…hehehe Hugs! Thank you, Paula!
Date: 5/27/2024 5:56:00 PM
I will fav this- your word flow was perfect and "earthy" that word you like :).....love sitting here reading anything you write....you deserve more recognition <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2024 11:27:00 AM
You touch my heart! Thank you so much! :)
Date: 5/24/2024 5:56:00 AM
A delightful write Kim, Loved it. I love the rain especially when at night and as well as it saves watering the garden LOL. We have been having a lot of unseasonal rain here in Australia. Too much of it - but I'm not complaining - except that the clothes dryer gets a constant workout Lol. Hugs Maria
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2024 6:08:00 AM
LOL! Thank you, Maria! Rain and sunshine work hand in hand. :) Kim
Date: 5/24/2024 2:52:00 AM
- Creatively written about summer rain, Kim ... a wonderful contribution - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2024 6:09:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! I always appreciate you! xx
Date: 5/23/2024 4:04:00 PM
ooo, I did so like this poem. Nice to see some effective onomatopoeia! I enjoyed the subtle energy of your poem, the refreshment in nature and soul of a summer rain. I especially liked "nourishing drink, replenish the owls." A lovely poem that truly captures the essence of summer rain. Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2024 6:54:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! I appreciate you so much! Higs and blessings to you and Bill!
Date: 5/23/2024 10:43:00 AM
"The hope of the window pane. We dream, as the outburst streams down to spill our dreams, like seeds giving more than the mundane." Profoundly beautiful! "Ker-splash, the puddles of inky-mud, stain the shins, leave me, us, them, refreshed and sodden with grins." I'm grinning from brim to overflowing brim. Delightful!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2024 10:51:00 AM
So glad this brought smiles! Hugs ~ Kim

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