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                                             Raindrops Kissing                                          

Premiere Contest WinnerRaindrops Kissing

I wake to cloud drifting skies- quiet and cool, except for the sound of raindrops; and I see my garden ... jewel, where beauty never stops; in my paradise dreamy, is the picture of serenity; all the garden saturated steamy, I step outside and in peace lose my identity; jewel-like petunias and geraniums flourishing, in magenta and purple and red- rich; and other flowers nourishing, my Buddha in his niche; and green ferns drape, hanging baskets of ivy cascade; herbs tangled- fall like a leafy cape, and delicate wind chimes dangle and serenade; angel statues and painted birds- here and there a forgotten tea set of cup and pot and a vase of violets still fair I must find thoughts ... I forgot "So, I close my eyes in lotus while raindrops kiss my face" ______________________ August 01, 2021 Poetry/Imagism/Raindrops Kissing Copyright Protected, ID 08-1376-967-01 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Imagism sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 09/01/2021 First Place ____________________ Submitted to the Standard contest, Your Favorite 2021 Poem sponsor, Julia Ward, Judged 07/19/2022 First Place
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Kauffman Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 10:48 AM
Very lovely Constance surely a garden to linger in and enjoy. Congratulations on your top win. Blessings!
La France Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:09 PM
Sam, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Peck Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 8:27 AM
So beautiful and calming, Constance. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:10 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Alex Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 7:20 AM
Great Imagism. "jewel-like petunias" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:10 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Seeker Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 1:36 AM
Wow! Another level! Congrats on your top win, Constance!
La France Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:11 PM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, blessings ~Constance
Edmonds  Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 1:28 AM
Beautiful poetry Constance, your garden sounds wonderful, graceful and colourful. Congratulations on your first place win for the second time… Belle
La France Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:12 PM
Belle, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, my garden is where I find my tranquility, blessings ~Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 9:23 AM
Back with "Congratulations" on your New win. A wonderful write/picture. I Love This One. Have a blessed day writing away.................
La France Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:12 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, blessings ~Constance
Canerdy Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 6:21 AM
AWESOME! Constance, congrats on your well-deserved top win with this lovely, vividly descriptive poem! Janice
La France Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:13 PM
Janice, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, blessings ~Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 5:50 AM
Congrats on this - AGAIN - I love it. God bless you. Love, Gina
La France Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:13 PM
Gina, thank you so much for the congrats and compliment, blessings ~Constance
Delaney Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 4:17 AM
Congratulations on your top placement, Constance: Your garden sounds like a magical place. Love, SuZ
La France Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:14 PM
SuZ, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and win, blessings and love ~Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 9:11 AM
Congratulations on your win. An amazing/beautiful write and picture. "Love It" Have a blessed day/weekend with a hug............
La France Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 7:34 AM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations and for the compliment, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 4:57 AM
This is extraordinary. I love it!!! You're amazing, dear Constance... such a inspiration and such an imagination... beautiful. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina
La France Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 10:19 AM
Gina, thank you for the compliment, comment and congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Agustin Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 4:04 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks so much for constantly sharing your poetic gift. Thanks also for my placements in your contests. God bless you.
La France Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 10:19 AM
Beata, thanks for the compliment and the congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Johnson Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 3:19 PM
Congrats, Constance. Beautifully portrayed in great form. Please send some raindrops my way. Blessings.
La France Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 10:20 AM
Curtis, thanks for the congrats and the compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 1:28 PM
Constance, should 'excellence' ever purpose a reason of its existence, undeniably, I will find it swimming in your words! Par excellence, mon amie! A trophy righteously earned, with my compliments, Aloha!
La France Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 2:23 PM
William, thank you for your wonderful comment and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Ibeh Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 8:37 AM
Gorgeous piece, Constance:-) Heartiest congratulations on your top win!
La France Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Edward, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Canerdy Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 8:09 AM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Constance. Janice
La France Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 2:24 PM
Janice, thank you for the congrats and the complimnet ~love and serenity _Constance
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 8:00 AM
Congratulations Constance! Your wonderful poem, like so many before, has risen to a top podium placement. You have come in "First", well done my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 2:25 PM
Emile, thank you for the contest and for my awesome placement and for the compliment and congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 2:04 PM
I love this, Constance. It's beautiful. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
La France Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 2:52 PM
Gina, thank you for the compliment and encouragement ~ love and serenity _Constance
Mchattie Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 1:22 PM
Beautiful. The imagery is amazing. Sounds like a wonderful area to relax in. Very creative my friend. Have a great day.
La France Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 2:53 PM
David, thanks for the compliment, oh yes, I love the garden I have created from nothing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Edmonds  Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:32 AM
Beautiful Constance and your garden sounds wonderful too ~ Belle
La France Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 2:54 PM
Belle, thanks for the compliment, my garden is a wonderful place to relax ~ love and serenity _Constance
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:03 AM
WOW! So beautiful, so charming - a perfect image of raindrops falling to create a serene sensational surrounding! Love this poem, Constance - your poems bring ethereal feelings for me! Going to my faves. Love ~ Mala
La France Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 2:55 PM
Mala, thanks for the compliment, yes my garden is very serene and ethereal, that's a good description, and thanks for the FAV ~ love and serenity _Constance
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