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Raindrops Falling 1

Raindrops falling Haven’t seen the morning paper yet Here are the raindrops One, two, three.. The headlines must be… Floods in Mumbai Don’t go away Listen to the voices One, two, three… Song of the protean wayfarer Dance of the gypsies Prancing sluices Dont go away Here goes the plangent fiddle too What a way to water the day.. By: S.Jagathsimhan Nair

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 11:14:00 AM

Jag, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/30/2012 7:22:00 PM

Interesting write. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/30/2012 4:47:00 PM

It must be momentarily marvelous..the first day of the monsoon! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/30/2012 4:00:00 PM

Congrats on an excellent win, Jag! I love that last line...love and blessings, Rhonda

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/30/2012 2:18:00 PM

congratulations on your win. Good to see your name again. Well done. Lee

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/30/2012 12:43:00 PM

Congratulations Jag this is a super win xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2012 11:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Jag. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/15/2012 9:56:00 AM

Yes Jag; This is a nice way to water the day. This remindsa me of a song. Raindrops Keep Falling On My Head.. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 8/15/2012 10:39:00 AM

could u pl soupmail me that song?

Cory Long

Date: 8/15/2012 9:01:00 AM

nice job on this poem. I like where you took the idea of raindrops falling. good luck in the contest cory