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Raindrops

Rinse off me, my depths of despair, with Angst ridden soul, that I fail to repair Imbibed sense of shame, that rises to the top Negative narrative that just won't stop, let me Drink from a well that cleanses and restores Repeating affirmations that open new doors Objectively view the pitter pattering things I think Prevent saturation that causes me to sink Safe in the rainstorm, not always on the brink

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Date: 6/29/2024 10:51:00 AM
Quite a nice winner. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K
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Date: 7/1/2024 10:05:00 AM
Thank you Sara, appreciated
Date: 6/25/2024 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely Acrostic "Raindrops" write. I like the soft rain not the storms. So Peaceful.... Have a wonderful day with your win..............
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Date: 6/25/2024 11:04:00 AM
Thanks Paula x
Date: 6/16/2024 3:39:00 PM
...beautiful write....'raindrops'...a favorite item of mine....the 1950's hurricane hazel occupied town one night...have loved any rain storm since......stan
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Date: 6/17/2024 8:11:00 AM
Viewed from the right vantage point they are completely beguiling - thank you for your comment, appreciated

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