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Rainbow Skies

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What would skies be without the mist, Clouds colored by the dawn, sun kissed? Such splendor rising pink and blue, Lavender, silver, gold spun too. Their shapes float softly through the sky Cast in hues of Apollo's eye. Gold, contrasts birds in silhouette While dawn shines through their misty wet As clouds express their sweet refrain And we are blessed by morning rain. When rainbows form in misty skies Clouds present treasures for our eyes. © Connie Marcum Wong

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Robert Lindley

Date: 10/22/2015 8:38:00 AM

Superb couplets my friend. A pleasure to read this fine morn! A7

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/18/2015 7:38:00 PM

I want to sigh with ease, just reading this poem! Lovely, Connie!!

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/13/2015 8:45:00 PM

I love the imagery in this! A beautiful write, Connie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Skat A

Date: 7/13/2015 12:17:00 AM

Connie, thank you for the support... SKAT

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/13/2015 9:04:00 PM

Thank you for my placement in your contest SKAT. There were some awesome entries! Hugs, Connie

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/12/2015 8:14:00 AM

This is so pretty Connie. Thanks for your visit.

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/19/2015 7:37:00 AM

Excellent rhyming and imagery. So like a painted masterpiece. This is a true gem mine friend. Adding this one to my fav list... Bravoooooooooooo........

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/20/2015 12:21:00 AM

How sweet of you Robert. Thank you very much for the fave and for your lovely comment. Blessings, Connie

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/12/2015 1:27:00 AM

Really good flow here Connie, as you brighten the page With your visiin..'

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/12/2015 2:02:00 PM

Thanks so much Joe. Cheers, Connie

Cona Adams

Date: 3/5/2015 7:30:00 AM

The couplet is one of my favorite poetic forms to read, Connie, and this one was a delight. Great job!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/5/2015 3:25:00 PM

Thank you very much for your generous comments Cona. They are much appreciated. This poem was written at dawn looking out toward Diamond Head. The volcanic smog we call vog presents beautiful sunrises and sunsets. ;-)