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What would skies be without the mist, Clouds colored by the dawn, sun kissed? Such splendor rising pink and blue, Lavender, silver, gold spun too. Their shapes float softly through the sky Cast in hues of Apollo's eye. Gold, contrasts birds in silhouette While dawn shines through their misty wet As clouds express their sweet refrain And we are blessed by morning rain. When rainbows form in misty skies Clouds present treasures for our eyes. © Connie Marcum Wong

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/22/2015 8:38:00 AM
Superb couplets my friend. A pleasure to read this fine morn! A7
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Date: 7/26/2015 11:34:00 PM
Great win, Connie!
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Date: 7/18/2015 7:38:00 PM
I want to sigh with ease, just reading this poem! Lovely, Connie!!
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Date: 7/13/2015 8:45:00 PM
I love the imagery in this! A beautiful write, Connie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/13/2015 12:17:00 AM
Connie, thank you for the support... SKAT
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/13/2015 9:04:00 PM
Thank you for my placement in your contest SKAT. There were some awesome entries! Hugs, Connie
Date: 6/12/2015 8:14:00 AM
This is so pretty Connie. Thanks for your visit.
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Date: 3/19/2015 7:37:00 AM
Excellent rhyming and imagery. So like a painted masterpiece. This is a true gem mine friend. Adding this one to my fav list... Bravoooooooooooo........
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/20/2015 12:21:00 AM
How sweet of you Robert. Thank you very much for the fave and for your lovely comment. Blessings, Connie
Date: 3/12/2015 1:27:00 AM
Really good flow here Connie, as you brighten the page With your visiin..'
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/12/2015 2:02:00 PM
Thanks so much Joe. Cheers, Connie
Date: 3/5/2015 7:30:00 AM
The couplet is one of my favorite poetic forms to read, Connie, and this one was a delight. Great job!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/5/2015 3:25:00 PM
Thank you very much for your generous comments Cona. They are much appreciated. This poem was written at dawn looking out toward Diamond Head. The volcanic smog we call vog presents beautiful sunrises and sunsets. ;-)
Date: 2/27/2015 11:32:00 PM
Loved this, reminds me the song "Over the rainbow"
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Date: 2/28/2015 3:24:00 AM
Thank you Arthur. I appreciate your lovely comment. Hugs, Connie
Date: 2/15/2015 8:02:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful Connie, love how you ended this gem ;) love Wilma
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Date: 2/14/2015 2:00:00 PM
very beautifully painted connie wishing you a happy valentines
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Date: 2/14/2015 8:30:00 AM
Absolutely lovely! You wielded an artist's paintbrush on this one.
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Date: 2/14/2015 8:07:00 AM
Lovely poem Connie. Happy Valentine's day. God bless XXXX rajat
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Date: 2/13/2015 11:46:00 AM
Wow! Beautiful imagery and as colourful as the visual itself. All the best and happy Valentine's Day! // paul
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Date: 2/13/2015 10:16:00 AM
We are captivated by nature's awesome presents and gently soothed by the beauty and splendor of clouds. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/13/2015 3:32:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Connie !!! - I wish you a sweet Valentine's Day and a beautiful weekend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/13/2015 12:45:00 AM
aha!! Now I can see that picture that didn't come through before. Very lovely!!
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Date: 2/13/2015 12:13:00 AM
G'day Connie... You painted a lovely picture with words here Connie. Regards - Lindsay
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Date: 2/12/2015 8:21:00 PM
Agree with Jan ! Beautiful imagery Connie. Bev
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Date: 2/12/2015 6:47:00 PM
stunning stunning stunning:-) Hugs jan xxx 7 xxx
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/12/2015 7:18:00 PM
Thank you Jan. The clouds here are breathtaking. I appreciate your comment. Hugs, Connie XXX000