Line Gauthier Poet Concrete

Rainbow

green
            yellow
                         violet
                                    indigo
                                               blue
                                                    orange
                                                               red
                                                                    pot
                                                                        of
                                                                        gold
                                                                            &
                                                                      leprechaun



AP: 3rd place 2023, Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on July 5, 2019 for contest VERSE A FAVORED FORM sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  HONORABLE MENTION

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Gershon Wolf April 28, 2019 at 2:31 PM How did I miss this 'cleverer than clever' concrete 'sculpture?' Wonderful! Congrats on POTD, and I hope there is a pot of gold along with that leprechaun at the end of YOUR rainbow, Line! :) gw Line Gauthier April 28, 2019 at 6:34 PM LOL Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Gershon. It's raining leprechauns over here.

P.S. Awtry April 28, 2019 at 5:52 AM I found this on the best new poems list, of course. Poetry magic :) Line Gauthier April 28, 2019 at 6:53 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, PS.

Susan Ashley April 12, 2019 at 6:40 PM Your lovely poem is fun and fabulously executed, Line. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors.. ~Susan Line Gauthier April 12, 2019 at 7:51 PM Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.

Paul Marc April 11, 2019 at 11:12 PM Love the creativity Line :) Line Gauthier April 11, 2019 at 11:39 PM Thanks, PM. Much appreciated.

Charlie Knowlton April 9, 2019 at 2:05 PM Congrats on your POTD Line... Line Gauthier April 9, 2019 at 5:14 PM Thank you, Charlie.

Tania Kitchin April 9, 2019 at 4:30 AM A fun creative poem, congratulations on POTD! Line Gauthier April 9, 2019 at 7:45 AM Thank you, Tania. Most appreciated.

Brandy Nicole April 7, 2019 at 7:21 PM :) I am softly smiling. I love the way you have us follow your Bright and Colorful words, right to the Pot of Gold. Very clever and creative. Congratulations Line, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy Line Gauthier April 7, 2019 at 8:04 PM Thanks, Brandy. Much appreciated.

Sunlite Wanter April 7, 2019 at 5:57 PM Congratulations on your creativity!!! Line Gauthier April 7, 2019 at 8:04 PM Thank you, Sunlite.

Dale Gregory Cozart April 7, 2019 at 3:50 PM Congrats on POTD, Line. How very clever of you! Line Gauthier April 7, 2019 at 4:37 PM Thx. Much appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong April 7, 2019 at 3:27 PM Such a creative way to display the rainbow with a golden ending. So cute Line! Congratulations on your POTD! : ) Line Gauthier April 7, 2019 at 4:37 PM Thank you so much, Connie.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 7, 2019 at 1:33 PM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Line Gauthier April 7, 2019 at 4:38 PM Thank you, Sunshine.

Arturo Michael April 7, 2019 at 12:13 PM Rainbow...Nice design...Congratulations Line Line Gauthier April 7, 2019 at 4:38 PM Thanks, Arturo.

Eve Roper April 7, 2019 at 9:15 AM very good and creative ... Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve Line Gauthier April 7, 2019 at 4:39 PM Thank you, Eve. Much appreciated.

Joseph May April 7, 2019 at 9:11 AM Congrats on POTD Line Line Gauthier April 7, 2019 at 4:39 PM Thank you, Joseph.

Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu April 7, 2019 at 8:55 AM Amazingly creative work .... Line congratulations on your POTD. Line Gauthier April 7, 2019 at 4:39 PM Thank you, Okonkwo. Much appreciated.

Charlie Smith April 7, 2019 at 8:22 AM Very imaginative Line,congratulations for POTD honors.... Line Gauthier April 7, 2019 at 4:40 PM Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 7, 2019 at 7:47 AM Fun! Congratulations on POTD Line! :) xomo! Line Gauthier April 7, 2019 at 4:40 PM Thx, Maureen. Much appreciated.

Agnes Krampe April 7, 2019 at 7:24 AM Nice shape poem, Line - congrats on POTD. Line Gauthier April 7, 2019 at 4:40 PM Thanks, Agnes. Much appreciated.

Winged Warrior April 7, 2019 at 7:09 AM Your verse a pot of gold at the end of the Rainbow, Line...a beautiful effect my friend... you are a master of concrete...Congrats!!! on POTD!!...^WW^...{*J*} Line Gauthier April 7, 2019 at 4:41 PM LOL Much appreciated, WW.

Paul Callus April 7, 2019 at 3:07 AM Lovely and creative, Line. After all these years, I'm still looking for that pot of gold:) ~ Congratulations on POTD. Regards // paul Line Gauthier April 7, 2019 at 4:41 PM Thanks, Paul. Don't stop looking.

Tom Cunningham April 7, 2019 at 2:09 AM A lovely colourful concrete Line, when I was in Ireland I never did find the pot of gold, hope you had a lovely birthday yesterday. Congrats on POTD. Tom. Line Gauthier April 7, 2019 at 4:41 PM Thank you so much, Tom. Most appreciated.

Carole Duet April 7, 2019 at 1:39 AM This is so cute. Love rainbows. I don't know about those sneaky leprechauns though. Congrats on receiving POTD, Line. Line Gauthier April 7, 2019 at 4:43 PM Thank you so much, Carole.

Jennifer Proxenos April 7, 2019 at 1:27 AM Congratulations Line on your POTD - the Leprechaun, a cheeky trickster, always one step ahead - very clever. Whenever I see a rainbow I shall always remember this poem! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Timothy Mcguire April 6, 2019 at 8:07 PM LOVE IT! As I was decending the bow I wondered if there would be gold and a leprechan. A favorite for me. Line Gauthier April 6, 2019 at 8:38 PM LOL there's no surprising you, Timothy! LOL Thanks.

Rhona Mcferran April 6, 2019 at 5:44 PM Hahaha! I LOVE this!! Another FAV for me! ;) Line Gauthier April 6, 2019 at 6:16 PM Thank you so much, Rhona. Much appreciated.

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