Rainbow

green yellow violet indigo blue orange red pot of gold & leprechaun AP: 3rd place 2023 Submitted on July 5, 2019 for contest VERSE A FAVORED FORM sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - HONORABLE MENTION POTD April 7, 2019 originally posted on April 5, 2019

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/28/2019 2:31:00 PM

How did I miss this 'cleverer than clever' concrete 'sculpture?' Wonderful! Congrats on POTD, and I hope there is a pot of gold along with that leprechaun at the end of YOUR rainbow, Line! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/28/2019 6:34:00 PM

LOL Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Gershon. It's raining leprechauns over here.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 4/28/2019 5:52:00 AM

I found this on the best new poems list, of course. Poetry magic :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/28/2019 6:53:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, PS.

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 4/26/2019 4:02:00 PM

A masterpiece! A worthy POTD, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/26/2019 4:45:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Sandra.

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/12/2019 6:40:00 PM

Your lovely poem is fun and fabulously executed, Line. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/12/2019 7:51:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.

P.M. Richter

Date: 4/11/2019 11:12:00 PM

Love the creativity Line :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/11/2019 11:39:00 PM

Thanks, PM. Much appreciated.

Charlie Knowlton

Date: 4/9/2019 2:05:00 PM

Congrats on your POTD Line...

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/9/2019 5:14:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/9/2019 4:30:00 AM

A fun creative poem, congratulations on POTD!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/9/2019 7:45:00 AM

Thank you, Tania. Most appreciated.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/7/2019 7:21:00 PM

:) I am softly smiling. I love the way you have us follow your Bright and Colorful words, right to the Pot of Gold. Very clever and creative. Congratulations Line, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2019 8:04:00 PM

Thanks, Brandy. Much appreciated.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 4/7/2019 5:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your creativity!!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2019 8:04:00 PM

Thank you, Sunlite.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 4/7/2019 3:50:00 PM

Congrats on POTD, Line. How very clever of you!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2019 4:37:00 PM

Thx. Much appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/7/2019 3:27:00 PM

Such a creative way to display the rainbow with a golden ending. So cute Line! Congratulations on your POTD! : )

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2019 4:37:00 PM

Thank you so much, Connie.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/7/2019 1:33:00 PM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2019 4:38:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine.

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/7/2019 12:13:00 PM

Rainbow...Nice design...Congratulations Line

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2019 4:38:00 PM

Thanks, Arturo.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/7/2019 9:15:00 AM

very good and creative ... Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2019 4:39:00 PM

Thank you, Eve. Much appreciated.

Joseph May

Date: 4/7/2019 9:11:00 AM

Congrats on POTD Line

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2019 4:39:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph.

Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu

Date: 4/7/2019 8:55:00 AM

Amazingly creative work .... Line congratulations on your POTD.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2019 4:39:00 PM

Thank you, Okonkwo. Much appreciated.

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/7/2019 8:22:00 AM

Very imaginative Line,congratulations for POTD honors....

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2019 4:40:00 PM

Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/7/2019 7:47:00 AM

Fun! Congratulations on POTD Line! :) xomo!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2019 4:40:00 PM

Thx, Maureen. Much appreciated.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/7/2019 7:24:00 AM

Nice shape poem, Line - congrats on POTD.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2019 4:40:00 PM

Thanks, Agnes. Much appreciated.

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/7/2019 7:09:00 AM

Your verse a pot of gold at the end of the Rainbow, Line...a beautiful effect my friend... you are a master of concrete...Congrats!!! on POTD!!...^WW^...{*J*}

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2019 4:41:00 PM

LOL Much appreciated, WW.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2019 3:07:00 AM

Lovely and creative, Line. After all these years, I'm still looking for that pot of gold:) ~ Congratulations on POTD. Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2019 4:41:00 PM

Thanks, Paul. Don't stop looking.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/7/2019 2:09:00 AM

A lovely colourful concrete Line, when I was in Ireland I never did find the pot of gold, hope you had a lovely birthday yesterday. Congrats on POTD. Tom.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2019 4:41:00 PM

Thank you so much, Tom. Most appreciated.

Carole Duet

Date: 4/7/2019 1:39:00 AM

This is so cute. Love rainbows. I don't know about those sneaky leprechauns though. Congrats on receiving POTD, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2019 4:43:00 PM

Thank you so much, Carole.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/7/2019 1:27:00 AM

Congratulations Line on your POTD - the Leprechaun, a cheeky trickster, always one step ahead - very clever. Whenever I see a rainbow I shall always remember this poem! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 4/6/2019 8:07:00 PM

LOVE IT! As I was decending the bow I wondered if there would be gold and a leprechan. A favorite for me.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/6/2019 8:38:00 PM

LOL there's no surprising you, Timothy! LOL Thanks.