Rain, the Story 1 of 3

Entry submitted in honor of - Constance ~ A Rambling Poet ~

Rain, The Story  1/ 3

I am telling you a story of a lovely girl Rain,
So cute and charming she was, 
Like a fairy or a refreshing drop of rain.

Rain had two heavenly white horses,
Beautiful, fierce and bold, like demons on earth,
She used to ride these bold and beautiful, one by one and
They liked Rain, like a fairy from heaven.

She had named the male horse as Past, and the female as Future,
Every day, she used to talk with them like humans, 
As they were accomplishing, many of her unusual thoughts. 

One day, while she was standing, beside her horse named Past,
Rain was trying to read in his lovely eyes,
The golden pages of her bygone past,
She knew that only her lovely friend Past,
Could bring back to her, the memories of her,
Most cherished love Aiden and the images of her lovely past, 
As only few years back,  she had lost her love Aiden.				

Her most dear lovely horse Past
Was a brilliant piece of creation,
Having the silk color,  of ivory white,
He was even capable to unfold before Rain,  
Those bygone images and stories of Rain’s lovely past,
When she used to often fly and dance like a butter fly,
And felt blooming like the petals of a lovely yellow Rose,
Amid the company of her love Aiden, she unfortunately lost.

She came close, to her dear graceful Horse Past
And looked deep into the mysterious eyes of her favorite Past,
The Horse Past came to know immediately, 
What Rain was trying to find, in the eyes of her dear friend Past,
Next moment, she felt mesmerized and lost in a new world, 
Created by the wonderful eyes of her brilliant horse Past.

In the enchanting depths, of the horse eyes,
She began to feel herself comfortable and completely lost,
Rain felt as if she was standing, on a ground full of ice like sand,
Where her love Aiden was calling her, from a little far off,  
A little away from her, but not too close,
Aiden had extended his hands to take her in his arms.		

She ran to meet her love and to be in his strong lovely arms,
Embracing, kissing and looking without moving her eyes from him,
This was always a passion for Rain, like a dream thought.

Ravindra
Kanpur India 28th Dec. 2010				Continue in part 2

Contest entry:        For this contest only
Contest Name:       Rain, The Story
Sponsored by:        Constance ~ A Rambling Poet ~
Written by:	       Ravindra K Kapoor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 9:20 AM
Congratulations Ravindra on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 4:05 PM
Congratulations, Ravindra, I just knew I would see a big win for you with this beauty! Luv, Andrea
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January 13, 2011 at 11:39 AM
How interesting that Rain could learn about the past from her horse. I have always had a special connection with horses and I love the way you created this fantasy. Beautifully written, Ravindra. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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January 13, 2011 at 9:57 AM
A beautiful story charmingly written. Love, Joyce
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January 13, 2011 at 8:37 AM
I remember reading this amazing journey of a poem, and thinking how wonderful that you took this challenge, and made it even more enchanting! What a wonderful story ....it should be published!! Just wonderful dear friend Ravindra ....my pleasure to read! love, Carrie
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January 13, 2011 at 6:30 AM
Congratulations onb this well deserved win in the contest of Constance, Ravindra
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January 12, 2011 at 9:01 PM
Many Congrats Ravindra on big win with this creative verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta
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January 12, 2011 at 8:24 PM
Congrats Ravindra on your magnificent win in the Rain Story contest with this exquisite entry my friend... such a lovely piece ..enjoy with luv a well deserved top spot..
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January 12, 2011 at 8:00 PM
A beautiful story. Lots of congratulations for this win.
Guzzi Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 9:53 AM
Interesting take on Constance's story. Wishing you ALL the best in the New year! Light & Love
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December 30, 2010 at 1:45 AM
The beginning of a charming poem' Lin~Ra
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 9:10 PM
what a lovely past she had. You sure took this challenge to heart, Ravindra. Very ambitious and I see there are two more sections? You have woven a fine legend for us here. On to next page!!
Sweetheart Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 9:00 PM
Ravindra.. a magnificent story u have begun with this poem and series.. excellent and exceptional entry into the contest.... Constance will simply adore this creation and the wonderful story of Rain... awesome ...good luck my friend and a very Happy New Year with richest blessings from above...with luv..
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December 28, 2010 at 6:37 PM
Lovely Ravindra,, it is amazing to see you enter a contest. And when I saw the title, I wondered about the title.. It was a very refreshing poem to read.. i can feel and see the image of the lovely story here,, Passion,, I love your ending line,...Poet D..
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December 28, 2010 at 6:33 PM
FOR KIND ATTEN. OF Constance. NOTE: I had posted the entire three-part Poem on 28th Dec. 10 but while checking on 29th, I have found that, the second part is missing. I reposted it twice thrice but again the same problem. Part II is vanishing after posting it. Hope you have received all the three parts; if not kindly let me know. ..Ravindra
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December 28, 2010 at 6:56 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest. Looking forward to reading this story when time to judge.
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