Rain Spider

At the stump of the fig tree
where sweetness and fragrance
have long departed
a rain spider has built a nest
of autumn-dried leaves
covered with a blanket
of delicate silk.

I stand and watch
the little spiders
coming out to play
in smooth fur jackets - 
first, a game of tag
and then a fencing game
with slender long legs.

Soon they will spread out
and scurry around in the hunt for food;
raising neck hairs and bring shrieks of terror
as they intimidate nervous children and wives.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Harper Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 7:50 PM
David, congratulations on your win, lovely moment and good contrast!
Duncan Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 7:38 AM
congrats on your win ;}
De La Croes Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 12:16 AM
Thank You, Debbie... David
Liwayway Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 8:51 AM
Congratulations on your grand win friend David :)Your poem is awesome :) cheers!!
De La Croes Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 12:18 AM
Thank you for your kind comments on my poem, Maria... David
Guzzi Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 6:43 PM
A charming vision. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
De La Croes Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 9:48 PM
Thank you, Debbie. I enjoyed reading your winning entry, too. Congratulations! David
Gorelick Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 6:22 PM
Oh, this is great. congrats on your win..well deserved. BG
De La Croes Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 9:47 PM
Thank you, Barbara. Congratulations to you, too, David
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 4:22 PM
David this is excellent. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
De La Croes Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 12:21 AM
Thank you, Connie. Your comments are very encouraging... Cheers, David
Kendrick Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 11:49 AM
Expressive and creative winning work..Congrats on your second place win..Sara
De La Croes Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 9:45 PM
Thank you, Sara. I appreciate your kind comments and good wishes... David
Eastman Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 10:55 AM
Well done. Congrats on the win.
De La Croes Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 9:44 PM
Thank you, Carol. I enjpyed your winning entry as well. Cheers, David
Johnson Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations. I really like this one. Love, Joyce
De La Croes Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 8:09 AM
Thank you, Joyce. Glad to share the rostrum with you and all the other entrants... David
Delaney Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 12:14 AM
Congratulations and thank you for entering my competition, I enjoyed reading all the entries so much. Yours was outstanding. SuZ
De La Croes Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 12:40 AM
Thank you, SuZ. I appreciate your kind appreciation of my poem... David
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 12:33 AM
wow, I think it should do great in the spider contest. The spider was well described.
De La Croes Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 1:06 AM
I am glad you like it, Andrea. Thanks for your visit... David
Gorelick Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 5:47 PM
This is great..I especially love the first part. BG
De La Croes Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 12:39 AM
I appreciate your visit and comments, Barbara. Have a great day! David
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 1:04 PM
- A magnificent building - spider web - a nice poem David! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
De La Croes Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 12:38 AM
Thank your for your visit and comment, Anne-Lise. Be well, David
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