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Rain Smiles At Her Handiwork

Delicate round droplets on perky white daisies, Rich verdant April grasses glowing like emeralds Yellow slickers with matching hats and red rain boots, World is alive, eager, enthusiastically wet and shiny. A tiny rainbow with glimpses of pinks and yellows Rain smiles at her handiwork, showing off spider web.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/28/2021 3:45:00 PM
Beautiful and pretty too. I love your rainy smiles :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/28/2021 4:21:00 PM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 3/28/2021 1:22:00 PM
Love this personification, and right beneath your poem, this video ad jumps up with a girl wearing what looks like a yellow rain hat!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/28/2021 4:21:00 PM
Thank you much.
Date: 3/27/2021 8:47:00 PM
Magical imagery is employed here to evoke natural delight. This is lovely, Caren. :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/28/2021 3:10:00 AM
Thank you Evelyn.
Date: 3/27/2021 5:19:00 PM
A very colorful and descriptive work.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/27/2021 7:08:00 PM
Thank you Robert

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