Rain Pours

Cold rain pours today The heat is put on early Drenching wet outside Longing to stay warm tonight Dreaming of things to be bright Heidi Sands 9/3/17

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Janis Thompson

Date: 9/7/2017 2:03:00 PM

Stay dry Heidi. I"m trying to also, Lovely little rhyme.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/7/2017 2:17:00 PM

Hi Janis. Thank you. We had flooding rain, for a couple days, but it is clearing up now. I appreciate your comment. Have a nice afternoon :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 9/4/2017 1:30:00 PM

Splendid tanka, Heidi. Hope warm dreams do come your way to knock the chill of the cold rain away. Lovely poem. Love and joy always.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/4/2017 2:07:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comment Freddie :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/4/2017 12:30:00 PM

This poem reminds me, in about a week and a half Hurricane Irma may give me a visit...

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/4/2017 12:33:00 PM

Hi Frederic. Although I am far from Irma, I have been watching it. I hope you will be careful and safe if the hurricane comes your way! Thank you for your visit here :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/3/2017 8:13:00 PM

Autumn knocking on the door...Nicely penned Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/3/2017 8:19:00 PM

It sure is Joseph! Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/3/2017 7:07:00 PM

Happy dreams! Heat already?

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/3/2017 7:15:00 PM

Hi Vijay. Thank you! Yes! heat already!