Rain Gentles the Grass

rain gentles the grass soothing the tiny creatures who simply waited

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/3/2018 10:35:00 PM

Magnified perception! ~ gw

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/4/2018 1:13:00 PM

No problem. Permission granted, of course. :) gw

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/4/2018 6:30:00 AM

I may create a poem using these words, with your permission, as they are yours.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/3/2018 1:03:00 PM

There is a sense of calm and serenity in these lines, Caren. Rain can be a blessing when truly needed. Regards // paul

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/3/2018 10:03:00 PM

We are having a light rain now, Paul. More haiku material.

Lunita Blanca

Date: 9/3/2018 10:11:00 AM

Nice Caren, many tiny bodies around which we fail to notice.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/3/2018 10:03:00 PM

Exactly what I was thinking. Thank you Carlos.