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Rain Dis-explained Mood

rain dis-explained mood umbrella’s up & at ‘em and ready to pack Past night’s wind whipped me into a wild frenzy sleeveless sun-soak light shorts, aloe, and sunscreen sunglasses and party things feet lightly bound in sneakers to hit French Quarter pavement green skies, non-blue mood not oppressive; hands shaking branches friendly grip no shades of sunny yellow smiley faces all around

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Date: 8/1/2024 8:50:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this, making me delight in rain's blessings. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2024 4:47:00 PM
Thank you, Beata! <3
Date: 7/31/2024 11:15:00 AM
Nature has a powerful lure on our feelings. This is beautiful, and seemingly transcendental. Loved this!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2024 4:47:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 7/31/2024 6:23:00 AM
Interesting lines. I am wondering if on vacation and you get rain. I enjoyed reading this one. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2024 6:26:00 AM
The weather here…the weather there. Getting ready… Hugs ~ Kim

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