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Rain Dis-explained Mood

rain dis-explained mood
umbrella’s up & at ‘em
and ready to pack
Past night’s wind whipped me
into a wild frenzy

sleeveless sun-soak
light shorts, aloe, and sunscreen
sunglasses and party things
feet lightly bound in sneakers
to hit French Quarter pavement

green skies, non-blue mood
not oppressive; hands shaking
branches friendly grip
no shades of sunny yellow
smiley faces all around

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 8/1/2024 8:50:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this, making me delight in rain's blessings. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2024 4:47:00 PM
Thank you, Beata! <3
Date: 7/31/2024 11:15:00 AM
Nature has a powerful lure on our feelings. This is beautiful, and seemingly transcendental. Loved this!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2024 4:47:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 7/31/2024 6:23:00 AM
Interesting lines. I am wondering if on vacation and you get rain. I enjoyed reading this one. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2024 6:26:00 AM
The weather here…the weather there. Getting ready… Hugs ~ Kim

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