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Rain Caress

Today is a drizzle day, The softest showers fall, A rain caress from the grey clouds above does enthrall ~ Drench my heart, o gentle spray! A brush of love from on high, A sprinkling of raindrops, This light mizzle makes me sigh, as this trickle ne'er stops ~ Saturate my soul, dear sky! A tender stroke of warmth moist dribbles down with levin*, Cool rains, my spirit they hoist, Blissful beads on my skin ~ Immerse me in joy unvoiced!
*levin - lightning

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Date: 6/28/2024 4:05:00 AM
"A brush of love from on high," "A tender stroke of warmth moist" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/26/2024 9:30:00 AM
Creative lines penned for JCB Burl's poetry contest. Way to go and congratulations on your winner. Sara K
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Date: 6/25/2024 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Rain Caress" write/story Peaceful Rain.... Have a wonderful day with your win..............
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Date: 8/1/2023 7:21:00 PM
A delightful write, Jo! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/31/2023 2:43:00 PM
what a glorious poem, you made the sensation of rain sound so wonderful Jo - something to be cherished and loved. many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/31/2023 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations Joanna! Your poem earned you a distinguished place in my contest. You should be proud of your placing, there were many good poems submitted, yet your poem rose above them; well done, my friend, Emile.
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Date: 7/27/2023 5:46:00 AM
Can feel the moist sensation on my skin as I read. An extremely well created poem.
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Date: 7/25/2023 9:03:00 PM
I feel the delight of getting slightly wet in a drizzle. The poem has the gentle cadence like that of a gentle spray. All the Best Joanna.
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Date: 7/25/2023 11:58:00 AM
Soft tones to this tender write. Much enjoyed the voice of your poem, Jo.
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Date: 7/25/2023 10:38:00 AM
A light drizzle on a hot day-what bliss! Beautifully written, Jo.
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Date: 7/25/2023 8:43:00 AM
Especially in this heat! Nice poem Joanna
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