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Rain and Teardrops End

J-anuary tenth morn O-pens the lovely Tuesday; C-old chill of the night E-vades the beacon's ray. L-et the early light warm Y-our soul and your heart; N-ew dawn has broken, the dusk and twilight depart. S-hadows Monday are gone, O-ne sky shares the zenith; L-et the coal-black clouds L-eave the lane underneath. E-vening shadows disappear, S-un has begun to ascend; T-he pain and sorrow fade, R-ain and teardrops E-nd.

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Lunarya Mornelithe

Date: 12/6/2024 9:45:00 PM

This poem, though brief, is poignant and evocative. It contrasts the coldness of a frigid March morning with the resilience of tears, suggesting that even in the harshest, most frozen moments, emotions cannot be silenced or suppressed. The image of ice crystals covering flowers adds depth, symbolizing the temporary nature of hardship and the eventual return of warmth. It’s a reminder that, no matter how cold or difficult life may seem, the heart’s capacity to feel and release remains unshaken. Tears, like life, do not freeze—they flow and heal.

Lunarya Mornelithe

Date: 12/6/2024 9:41:00 PM

This poem is a beautifully structured reflection on renewal and hope. The acrostic form, spelling "JOCELYNE," adds a personal touch, weaving the speaker's message into a story of transformation. The transition from darkness to light, from sorrow to healing, mirrors the inner journey we all take when facing pain. The imagery of rain and teardrops ending signifies not just the passing of a storm but the arrival of peace and clarity. It’s a poignant reminder that after every hardship, there’s the promise of a brighter dawn.