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''Rain Acrostrain''

~~RAIN ~  ACROSTRAIN~~
'   '    '   '     '   '   '   '    '   '
;  ;    ;   ;    ;   ;   ;  ;   ;   ; 
Raindrops waltz listless in heavenly grace
;  ;  ;  ;   ;   ;  ; ;  ; ;  ; ;   ; ;  ; ;
awaking flowers as they too, drink rains caress,
; ;   ;; ;    ;  ;   ;  ;   ;   ;   ;   ;  ;   ;  ; ;  ;
ineffable sweetness, ephemeral: 
;  ; ; ; ;  ; ;   ; ; ;    ; ;    ; ;   ; ;   ;  ;  ;  ;  ; ;
nature's champagne blesses all Eden with finesse. . .
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4:37 pm, October 26, 2015

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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John Lawless Date: 12/13/2015 4:35:00 PM Olive, love the presentation of this one...complete with raindrops. Well done. congrats on the win Login to Reply

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 12/11/2015 8:23:00 AM Congratulations on the placement of the contest Olive. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 12/10/2015 12:52:00 PM Olive, Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT* Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 12/9/2015 10:35:00 PM Great write, Olive, congratulations on you top win!!!!! Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 12/9/2015 10:25:00 PM Lovely .. so creative Olive.. the way u hv presented just awesome.. congrats on top place win! Login to Reply

Heather Ober Date: 11/10/2015 10:19:00 AM This is so creative!! I especially love that opening line. Really stunning imagery! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/16/2015 8:10:00 PM heather, thanks you for that splendid remark.. it sure made me smile.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)

Laura Hay Date: 11/5/2015 10:41:00 AM Super poem and imagery of your raindrops, well done ;) , warm regards, Laura. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/16/2015 8:07:00 PM Laura, i thank you so much.. I love imagery in poems plus the feelings coming from the words.. =`)

James Inman Date: 11/3/2015 8:35:00 AM Oh, Olive. Incredible imagery, especially in the first two lines. I'm jealous, "raindrops waltz listless," and "drink rains caress," I wish I had thought of those. Beautiful! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/4/2015 12:04:00 AM thanks much James, this a new form from formed by some of our poets here in soup and I'd grab the chance to do it and write my own.. I enjoyed writing this.. =`)~O.E.

Rainbow Promise Date: 10/28/2015 11:18:00 AM Nicely written. I love how you present this poem with raindrops, it emphasizes the importance of what rain does. Thanks for sharing. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/3/2015 7:25:00 AM I want to present the rian effects too hence i pt some raindrops... =`)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/27/2015 3:53:00 PM not only a sweet and beautiful poem, but the LOOKS of it are great, with the raindrops you made. Wonderful, Olive. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/3/2015 7:23:00 AM Thanks much Andie.. I just tried this.. =`)

James Fraser Date: 10/27/2015 3:23:00 PM Love the crafting of this little Gem Olive. The raindrops add that little touch of magic to it. Not long until we walk our rains, which in Inverness can be every season, can't wait~Hugs//James xxx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/3/2015 7:22:00 AM Yes James i so want to start our lifetine journey soon.. hugs!

Robert Lindley Date: 10/26/2015 9:44:00 PM Eye, heart and mind, you feasted them all. Brilliantly creative my friend A7... GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST... Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/27/2015 9:33:00 PM Robert thank you for your wonderful comment... =`) Weee I just enjoyed writing.. =`)

Emile Pinet Date: 10/26/2015 6:40:00 PM I am captured by the images so skillfully developed by the author and the passion and beauty of the words leave me refreshed as with a spring rain. Emile. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/27/2015 8:55:00 PM Thanks much Emile for your depth comment and poetic remark.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)

Paul Callus Date: 10/26/2015 5:46:00 PM I love your poem and creativity, Olive_eloi!!! I know of water that was turned into fine wine...yours turned into champagne!:) I predict a sure winner! Hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/27/2015 3:44:00 AM Yes, I too know of that story Paul, the first miracle of Jesus in the wedding.. =`) thanks much for loving this poem.. =`) hugs! ~oLive eLoisa =`)

Tim Smith Date: 10/26/2015 3:11:00 PM Wow Olive this is awesome and I love the raindrops. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/26/2015 9:02:00 PM Tim I thank you for your kind visit and leaving a kind remark.. =`)

Lin Lane Date: 10/26/2015 7:23:00 AM Beautifully created in word and sketch, Olive. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/26/2015 8:53:00 PM Thanks much Lin.. =`) I enjoyed putting into writing my thoughts... =`)