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now rain and now sun a nature of human mind dark clouds on your bun _______________________________ Kokata, May28, 20I6

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Date: 5/28/2016 9:12:00 AM
We humans tend to gravitate to our cloudy thoughts. I enjoyed your Haiku.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/28/2016 10:44:00 AM
Thanks. What I omitted to mention to Andrea is that the bun usually comprises a pattern of interlaced strands of hair. Thought, nature, cloud, hair bun......
Date: 5/28/2016 8:50:00 AM
Oh my, That last line is so funny to me. You know what slang for bun is for Americans, right? OMG, my CAPCHA reads BUN. I am not kidding!!!! What are the chances????
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/28/2016 10:37:00 AM
I am not aware of this slang you say about. Long hair gathered into a bun shape at the back of head is a well known dictionary meaning and is a much-liked hair style in India. This is my bun where clouds dwell; why the clouds only know.
Date: 5/28/2016 7:32:00 AM
- Lovely haiku, Probir :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/28/2016 10:45:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 5/28/2016 7:27:00 AM
A nice haiku Probir
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/28/2016 10:46:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 5/27/2016 8:44:00 PM
nice write Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/27/2016 9:21:00 PM
Good morning from Kolkata and thank you...

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