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Rain

And no one kept a tally of the rain and Drops that fell. And the rain falls.. plick pli. Ck. Pli Ck. Strobing the asphalt Counting souls petrichor turns to acrid urine. Plickplick pli Plickplick pl Ick And the rain fell And no one kept a tally Of the drops of rain that fell.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/12/2016 10:46:00 PM

John,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2016 12:23:00 PM

- Poetry: Music in words .... rhythmic expression of emotion, like the nectar of the bee, you are sharing here with us John :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 6/8/2016 12:08:00 AM

oh wow, John, that's awesome rain imagery. :), Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Jan Allison

Date: 6/7/2016 10:51:00 PM

great deep imagery here :-) hugs Jan x