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RAIN it’s raining non stop humidity out-of-sight those maddening raindrops! not a real downpour but just this steady drizzle only good for the crops sticky is the word such that when i get up the chair comes with me it’s a frog’s delight… noah’s sensing the great flood… the whole world at sea.. owl and pussy cat in their slimy pea green boat drifting endlessly! these depressing thoughts – the sun will never come out – have me feeling yuck! then i watch the news “twister levels many blocks” and i’m thunderstruck!

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Date: 8/2/2013 1:21:00 AM
glad you finally saw my purring contest ,Daver!! thanks.
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Date: 6/6/2013 8:23:00 PM
Ah yes...so humid here in Oklahoma you are sweating when you get out of the shower! Nice write....:-)
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Date: 6/5/2013 10:49:00 PM
oooh. That was the perfect ending for this set, Daver. So you are getting very wet. that's what i heard about my wonderful midwest. But for now I am happy to be here in Utah instead. Good seeing you today, my friend
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Date: 6/5/2013 6:32:00 AM
Dave - I love the owl and the pussycat. Yes, it's a rude awakening when tragedy realy strikes. xxx's ooo's Kathy
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Date: 6/4/2013 2:51:00 PM
Well conveyed situation Daver; got me listening for the creak of thing/time. As i considered that steady rain..and the clinging humid air..' I woulden't have expected it to be humid there though..' keep on writing..Joe.))
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Date: 6/2/2013 10:09:00 AM
- Rain also provides me such feelings, Daver. - Hope the sun comes tomorrow! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/1/2013 4:01:00 PM
love this witty write, Daver
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Date: 6/1/2013 3:31:00 PM
there are 7 wonders on this planet,, i've just read them...
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