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A colorless day, cast in shades of muted gray Teardrops falling from a sorrowful sky Running down the face of His creation To be wiped away by the fingers of the sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/21/2011 1:27:00 PM
wow, bob... miles of congrats on a well deserved award! :)huggs!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/21/2011 1:49:00 PM
Thanks for your support nette. Much appreciated
Date: 7/21/2011 1:19:00 PM
Inspired writing . congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/21/2011 1:48:00 PM
Thanks Joyce Appreciate your comments
Date: 7/21/2011 9:14:00 AM
Such a stunning picture conveyed here Bob. Love it! Congrats on your win, best wishes Em :)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/21/2011 1:47:00 PM
Thanks Emma
Date: 7/21/2011 9:05:00 AM
Bob, Great entry for a top spot. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/21/2011 9:12:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 7/21/2011 7:12:00 AM
Such beauty in each word, Bob....just lovely!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/21/2011 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Carrie
Date: 7/21/2011 6:42:00 AM
Lovely visual write Bob ;) Congratulations on your first place win :)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/21/2011 9:13:00 AM
Thanks Wilma. Hope it's not my last:)
Date: 7/21/2011 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/21/2011 9:14:00 AM
Thank you Carol
Date: 7/21/2011 6:12:00 AM
Congrats Bob on your first place win with rain as sorrowful teardrops falling from the sky.. elegant my friend..enjoy..
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/21/2011 9:15:00 AM
Appreciate the kudos Linda-Marie. Thank you
Date: 7/19/2011 2:29:00 PM
lovely visuals and vivid imagery Bob.. grand poetry luv..
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/19/2011 8:47:00 PM
Thank you Linda-Marie
Date: 7/19/2011 2:00:00 PM
I love this personification. It sounds so lovely, Bob.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/19/2011 8:48:00 PM
Your comments are very much appreciated.
Date: 7/19/2011 10:55:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Bob.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/19/2011 12:35:00 PM
Appreciate it Carol
Date: 7/19/2011 9:48:00 AM
oops, * i like the way this flowed in such few lines..*
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/19/2011 12:35:00 PM
Thanks nette
Date: 7/19/2011 9:47:00 AM
rich in substance, bob... i like the way this was flowed in such fw lines! wow...:) huggs, nette
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