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Clouds full to the brim Dancing footfalls jingle down Melting chocolates ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 15/5/16, Kolkata

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/19/2016 7:49:00 AM
Hi Probir, what can one say about this Haiku, it is excellent, just like the first. The imagery sings into the mind. Another beautiful Haiku Probir. This one goes into my faves as well. Great creativity and well written Haiku Probir. This has to be a seven....Mike.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/21/2016 2:14:00 AM
Thank you Vlad...
Date: 5/14/2016 8:56:00 PM
Beautifully written Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/21/2016 2:14:00 AM
Thank you Lenny

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