Rain

Today I listened to the rain,
its soft fall and trickle down
patter on a metal roof,
its melodic tap tap
on a large leaf and the gurgle
of its spill deep in a downpipe.
My world was distilled to drops
of rainwater clinging like silver beads
to the length of a clothesline,
glistening furiously in a brief 
burst of sunlight.

I gave the moment no rank
or a place in the hierarchy 
of meaningful things,
hardly worth a mention, 
but simply offered the world 
some room and was moved 
to feel the rain wet my face 
and taste it's tears. It shared much 
with me today…..and this
is a thank you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Lawless Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 5:58 AM
it is good to blow a kiss to the wind and smile at the raindrops. Nicely done
Willason Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 4:39 PM
Keep em happy I say, otherwise they are likely to throw a hissy and become hazardous. Thanks mate... Paul
M  Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 5:14 AM
How very beautiful Paul as per usual….l love the rain l go to sleep to it every night on my ipad….rain and thunder! The rain makes me feel safe for some reason….Debx
Willason Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 4:37 PM
Now thats an idea...rain on tap to soothe and take the mind off somewhere...must try. Appreciate yr comments dear Deb. Cheers, Paul
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