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Yesterday I was in the parched, red desert, where it pours only seldom, Bearing joy for varicolored cacti blooms, a silvery shower, very welcome. This morning I deluged the green, pathless forest, at the dawn of purple. Tomorrow, wet footsteps will travel, down the tree-lined street of myrtle. In wild days of ago, my fervor caused floods, as I danced in dewberries; Then a soft, yellow sun spun rich gold, making cherries and cranberries! While there is gladness everywhere I go, my sporadic errors humble me, Like an errant wind which blows off course, tenacious, golden honeybee!

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/7/2024 10:12:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this lovely "Rain" Personification write again. What A Pretty Picture.... Have a blessed day writing away...........

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/7/2024 9:10:00 PM

I appreciate your comments so much, Paula. They brighten my day. Have a wonderful week.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/5/2024 7:04:00 PM

Evelyn, a beautiful poem, congratulations on your winning placement.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/5/2024 9:18:00 PM

Thank you very much, Tania. Your contest was delightful!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/26/2024 9:15:00 PM

Each line beautiful, filled with delicious color. Love those last two lines. You have a way with words, Poet!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/27/2024 9:07:00 PM

Your gracious comments make a pause in my day for smiles. Thank you, Kim.

Tom Woody

Date: 3/26/2024 12:01:00 PM

You do poetic impersonations so well it just stands to reason you would do personification justice as well. This is awesome Evelyn

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/26/2024 7:16:00 PM

I appreciate your wonderful compliments very much, Tom. Blessings.

David Smith

Date: 3/26/2024 11:58:00 AM

Interesting way to encourage us to think more on looking for silver linings and the ebbs and flows of life on planet earth. Also the saying 'You cannot make an omelet without breaking eggs springs to mind'. Your versatility as a poet shines here. Best regards David in NZ

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/26/2024 7:14:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your positive thoughts on this poem, David. They are sooo delighting.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/23/2024 5:23:00 AM

Exquisite story written by rain. Diction used is truly poetic splendor. This is beautiful Evelyn.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/23/2024 2:52:00 PM

My appreciation of your uplifting comment knows no bounds. Thank you, Speaks Volumes.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/22/2024 2:41:00 AM

Rain is essential. Occasionally we need more of it. Others like cacti, need very little. Loved your contrast.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/22/2024 9:16:00 PM

Everyday life is dependent upon beautiful rain. So nice of you to share your positive impressions. Thanks.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/21/2024 6:19:00 PM

The tender notes of nature brought nostalgic feelings to my mind. Like the wind, I too like to travel, so maybe we're sisters. I send hugs.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/21/2024 7:09:00 PM

I'm so glad that this poem evoked pleasant associations for you, Paula. Traveling can be so exciting and fun! thank you for your warm remarks. Have a nice weekend.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/21/2024 1:48:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this lovely "Rain" write. Pretty Picture. "Good Luck" Have blessed day writing away.................

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/21/2024 7:02:00 PM

It's good to know that you enjoyed both picture and poem, Paula. Thank you very much for your positive response. Have a nice weekend.

Silent One

Date: 3/21/2024 1:08:00 PM

Great personification.. Nicely done..

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/21/2024 6:54:00 PM

Thank you very much. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/21/2024 6:06:00 AM

Colorful, eventful personification, Evelyn. Your talented pen brings to fore the attributes of rain entwined with glory of nature.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/21/2024 6:52:00 PM

Glorious nature is worthy of so much comment. Thanks so much for your words of appreciation. All good wishes, Evelyn

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/21/2024 6:01:00 AM

- Yes, I think a silvery shower is very welcome in a desert Evelyn :) - (we have too often rain :( - A lovely poem, best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/21/2024 6:45:00 PM

Thank goodness nature always finds a way. Cacti blooms are gorgeous. I appreciate your vey nice comment, Anne-Lise. hugs :)

Chris Con

Date: 3/20/2024 7:57:00 PM

Beautifully written thought with great depth and connection.

Tom Woody
Date: 3/26/2024 12:02:00 PM

Why Chris, you, you've changed!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/21/2024 12:20:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words of esteem, Chris.