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Poetry/Pleiades/Rain
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1576-366-04
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, September 04, 2023
For the International Contest, H or R Pleiades
Sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 09/07/2023

Fourth Place

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Raindrops began falling, rumbles of thunder roared, ravines became deep chasms ! Reckless drivers in cars, refuge anywhere found, recovery of dead . . . Remembrance and candles.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/8/2023 11:06:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win. I love your "Rain" write/great picture. Have a fun day writing away..............
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Constance La France
Date: 9/9/2023 4:00:00 PM
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Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment.
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/8/2023 2:36:00 AM
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Your pleiades is so very well written, such vivid imagery, and it felt like i saw this as i read your lines, powerful story. Moving and profound. Well deserved win. Congratulations
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Constance La France
Date: 9/8/2023 5:21:00 AM
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Ink, thank you so much for the lovely comment, compliment and congratulations.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2023 2:08:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your win in the Pleiades contest, Constance :) - hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 9/8/2023 5:22:00 AM
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Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the congratulations, hugs.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 9/7/2023 6:03:00 PM
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Such a sad and melancholy write, Constance. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Constance La France
Date: 9/8/2023 5:22:00 AM
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Kim, thank you so much for the comment, and congrats, blessings.
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Joseph May
Date: 9/7/2023 5:51:00 PM
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Rain can have devaststing effects, Congrats on your win Constance
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Constance La France
Date: 9/8/2023 5:22:00 AM
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Joseph, thank you so much for the comment and congrats.

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