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RAIN dripping heaven's tears petrichor comforts, reminds of eating hot pakoras* and sipping chai**, "Rain is God's love showered on us"
8th April 2023 *Pakoras - an Indian dish made from onions / vegetables dipped in gram flour batter **Chai - tea For Joseph May's "Pyramids 3---7lines" contest

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Date: 4/30/2023 4:03:00 PM
love your images that remind you of rain. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 4/30/2023 5:09:00 AM
Back to enjoy your pyramid poem and to Congratulate you on your win my dear poet friend! Hugs
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Date: 4/29/2023 9:17:00 PM
Pakoras and rain is a heavenly combination! Beautiful memory. Congratulations, Jo!
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Date: 4/29/2023 4:44:00 PM
Pretty words! Congratulations!
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Date: 4/29/2023 12:17:00 PM
- I hate rain ... there is never a lack of rain here ... I can share with everyone who loves rain, Jo :))) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 4/29/2023 10:39:00 AM
Yum. I love the rain, too. Congratulations on your win Jo! :)
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Date: 4/29/2023 9:44:00 AM
Very nicely penned Jo, Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/15/2023 7:36:00 AM
Now I'm definitely hungry Jo. This is such great pyramid built with imagery. :)
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Date: 4/10/2023 7:01:00 AM
I love your pyramid poem more than mine my dear poet friend Jo. I love so much the heaven's tears, comforts of the petrichor while enjoying some foods and drinks and top of all, the quote. So true, Rain is God's love showered on us. A love that sustains earth's life and everything in it.Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Best of luck in the contest my dear poet friend. Hugs
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Date: 4/9/2023 1:51:00 AM
Great food suggestions.
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Date: 4/8/2023 9:47:00 AM
An engaging poem, evoking the pleasantest of sensations. Nice work, Jo. :)
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Date: 4/8/2023 6:01:00 AM
Pakoras and chai--warm cuddles, indeed! Nicely done, Jo.
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Date: 4/8/2023 5:29:00 AM
Love this, Joanna. Appeals to almost all senses. Best of luck.
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Date: 4/8/2023 4:39:00 AM
When it rains, steamy tea with pakoras is simply delicious ! A beautiful entry for the contest ! All the Best, dear Jo
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