Rain


RAIN
dripping
heaven's tears

petrichor comforts, 
reminds of eating hot
pakoras* and sipping chai**, 

"Rain is God's love showered on us"



8th April 2023

*Pakoras - an Indian dish made from onions / vegetables dipped in gram flour batter
**Chai - tea

For Joseph May's "Pyramids 3---7lines" contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2023 4:03:00 PM

love your images that remind you of rain. Congrats in the contest.

Len Gasun

Date: 4/30/2023 5:09:00 AM

Back to enjoy your pyramid poem and to Congratulate you on your win my dear poet friend! Hugs

Akanksha Ayantika

Date: 4/29/2023 9:17:00 PM

Pakoras and rain is a heavenly combination! Beautiful memory. Congratulations, Jo!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/29/2023 4:44:00 PM

Pretty words! Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/29/2023 12:17:00 PM

- I hate rain ... there is never a lack of rain here ... I can share with everyone who loves rain, Jo :))) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/29/2023 10:39:00 AM

Yum. I love the rain, too. Congratulations on your win Jo! :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/29/2023 9:44:00 AM

Very nicely penned Jo, Congrats on your win

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/15/2023 7:36:00 AM

Now I'm definitely hungry Jo. This is such great pyramid built with imagery. :)

Len Gasun

Date: 4/10/2023 7:01:00 AM

I love your pyramid poem more than mine my dear poet friend Jo. I love so much the heaven's tears, comforts of the petrichor while enjoying some foods and drinks and top of all, the quote. So true, Rain is God's love showered on us. A love that sustains earth's life and everything in it.Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Best of luck in the contest my dear poet friend. Hugs